I do feel bad for Lily. Knowing the she couldn’t do magic, and that her mother had known all along would be absolutely horrible. Lucy’s response to Lily refusing to apologize to her mother made is a lot worse.

Anddd... Lucy is just making this much, much worse. Her responses to some stuff can be pretty irritating, but she’s just a kid, so it’s somewhat fine.

Ouch, just rereading this, but Layla shouldn’t have dropped the bomb on Lily like that. I mean, she knew Lily couldn’t do magic ever since she was born..

It's such a different plot from other fanfiction. so please start updating again.

My soul needed a character like lily. You have no idea how much reading this story and finding out the oc ain't all about that love beats all attitude. Was instant love and hand down I will follow her life in fairy tale till the end!

Continue please this is interesting

Please update!

I'm laughing my butt off from the last line XD

you haven't updated in so long, but this sure is interesting

Uffff, dude the plot is crazy, i hope you update your history or someone adopt it

I really do hope you update this soon. This story is amazing. I thought I knew where this story was going then BAM! Lily doesn't have any magic, she's a half demon?! Is it wrong of me to love how bitter she is? My only critic is how quickly she jumps from being with Ur and Lyon and suddenly finding Ultear. I mean it fits but I want more details, besides that, this story is so great.

Wow. Lucy is really a... naive, selfish little son of a bitch. I’m glad Layla died, and I hope Lily makes Lucy’s life an torturous pit.

Will Lucy ever wake up and recognize what Lily’s going through?

Can't wait for update

I hope that you plan to update this again because I would like to find out what happens next

Uhh... question! Are you going to continue this? I just love the fic and I was hoping you'll continue. If not I would like confirmation of it being discontinued