love this... very sweet idea what the socks... I line this

Hmmm... Pre-marital socks... I'll have to remember that one :)

Beautiful, I am in awe with your talents with words (and maybe a little jealous too :) ).
You write Killian POV in an amazing way, you completely catch his voice and his mindset in 3a. His self-loathing, his loneliness even when among of people, not really being a part of a group. And his feelings for Emma, how he wants to go near her but at the same time his wariness at being rejected and make her run away.
You also really well display their relationship at this point of the story. And the socks, even if a fun part, are a very good way to show their understanding of each other, a little link between them, of two lost childs who didn't have enough. I love that Emma understand what the socks mean and steal some of them, showing that understanding.
I adore the last lines when Killian thinks that Emma has already stealing everything he is, included his favorite socks.

This is so adorable. And socks! You two and your socks, I love it. Very sweet and Killian is of course the most perfect gentleman puppy pirate there ever was. Loved it, great job.