I must say. You have made a very promising start. Even though I can tell you are going for the “love at first sight” trope. I think you handled pretty good. And I find you Brother sister dynamic with Tracer. I thought it was amusing as all hell. I really like your story and how you made sure to make Dan seem extra special (for the most part so far)
And it seems like this is a rare fic that actually finishes. I’ll be looking forward to seeing the end.

It’s fics like yours that make me want to go on with my own oc-oriented stuff

And I know people have differing opinions. But I’ll say it anyway

Mei is best girl. Even if she is a pain in the ass to play against

I didn‘t like Pharah before and this made it even and stupidity rains from above,gentlemen!

Well,according to many other Overwatch fanfics,love at first sight is indeed possible.

I was going to comment about Dan acting so retarded and then I read the authors note and you explained that he’s literally retarded lol. It explains a lot though, thanks for clearing that up

Did you have to make the main character so fucking creepy?

Dan is acting like a little bitch lol

You can’t be good at mei. Mei takes no skill. It’s just good down left click, make a bind to say hello and the. Right click to the head omegalul

This one gave me some BioShock vibes, heh. Near the end though. I'll try to make an in-depth review of this entire thing once I finish it.

Quite enjoyable, keep up the hard work

Man, Dva is thirsty AF.

Holy shit...just...wow. Amazing fic. I absoultely love it. I hope to see Breaking the Shell very soon!

That's it's? I am so very sad now.

Just spent 5 hours reading this whole story at once loved it it had some good plot points in it even if some times it was repetitive it was funny and overall a great story wish there was a sequel or even another ending where he doesnt have to freeze himself but other wise amazeing

Sooooooo is there coming a 2 to this Fanfiction or are we just ending it there. It would be a shame to end it because you are talented at writing, the story is great and you never get bored while reading any of your story's but I would like to know what happens with the rest of the characters new relationships after five years.
If you don't write any more to this story it's fine because it can end just there and if that is the case I will have to say thank you for writing this and posting it so we can read it
Regards a big fan of your work.

My heart just shattered into a million pieces. I expect some sort of continuation! I need closure goddammit! Even if there is none, you ended on a high note. Sad maybe, but still a high note. Fucking Sombra…