TEARS...WERE...SHED...

this is good story (well sad one)

sans got nerf lol

I started reading this story all the way back at the end of 2017, and I was captivated by the end of the first chapter. After I had quickly caught up to the (at the time) most recent update, I stopped thinking about it, and it inevitably fell to the wayside. Having finally returned, I can safely say that this story is just as fantastic as I remember, possibly more. I absolutely didn't expect it to end the way that it did, but these last couple of chapters tied it all together in such a neat fashion. I'm glad that I finally came back to this, and I have no doubt that I shall be reading Fade Away for a very long time.

That was... extremely painful to read. And the way it ended was... tragic. I did not expect character death, TRUE character death to occur for this story. And by the end, it just seems like... all of this stemmed from a mistake. Why was the initial true ending even reset? Why did Chara have to die to fix it? I just...

I think, when it comes down to it, I hate that I like this story. No, 'like' isn't the right word. It wasn't pleasant. It didn't feel good. But 'like' is the closest thing I can think of to come to describe my overall... 'approval' of this story. Please don't take this as a denouncement of your story. It is anything but. That's part of what bothers me I think, that this is so gosh darned well written and believable and doesn't just drive the angst train for angst's sake. This... felt real. At least, it did to me. And... I think part of me needed to read it, even if in the end, I don't really appreciate it very much.

If you do end up reading this review, I apologize for it being rather... convoluted and confusing. Your story has made me feel something in a way I've not quite experienced before and I'm coming to terms with it as I write this. You delivered a good story, and I... was 'something' to read it.

Hot damn! That was a good fanfic and a finished one at that which is a huge bonus in my books. Anyways I loved your interpretation of the dynamic between Frisk and Chara with neither of them conforming to an absolute With Frisk having anger and jealously and Chara being protective and self sacrificial. I also found the relationships to be quite different but refreshing with Frisk and Undyne having the mother and child dynamic and Toriel having a slightly more distant relationship with Frisk and Sans having the most distant and awkward relationship to Frisk. Anyhow that's enough rambling out of me and if you ever per chance happen to read this I wish you the best.

Sincerely,
Cnut

i just wanna cry right now...and i just didn't want to finish this...i just cant i canti cant i cant i can t i cant i cant i cant. this did make everything seem...a little less bleak, even if it was only for a little while. i was just...drawn to it..like, I wanted to find something angsty or whatever, and now, I really wish this quarantine was over so i could do something. i just...empathize with Frisk. i just couldn't take the crying i couldnt take it. i dont' know what to do. i don't know if this helped in the long run, but it made me feel better now.

Hello authorI just finished reading this fanfic. Some say the ending is not content enough. However, for me, I love it. It is sad that Chara sacrifice herself for better ending and everyone’s happiness. Nevertheless, even after everything they do, Chara does not deserve the death.

The whole story. I’ve never thought deeply about the aftermath of numerous time-loops. Especially Frisk’s apathy, suicidle thoughts, and traumas. I was just simply curious when I read the description of this fanfic. How will an author deal with this damn dark topic. Suicide. Now, I, who read the whole 30 chapters in a day, am feeling grateful for finding out this fanfic.

According to my experience, in the fandom, it is uncommon that Undyne positioned herself as a mother. Also, sans. Everyone (almost everyone) kinda think that he deserves to hate frisk after everything. For me, Sans is just a damn lazy bone, putting effort on absolutely nothing even in genocide runs. This fanfic is unique that it is more focused on the dark side of the game (that might possibly happens) and positioning some characters differently from other fanfics. This uniqueness make the story more more better. I love it. Also, I am so happy how characters resolve (and try to resolve) the problem at the end. Maybe this is becuz I personally prefer happy ending than sad ones. I wonder how the story ends in different, sad way.

I think the whole process of writing this fanfic meant a lot to you. As I read, you were depressed when you just started this story. Story full of darkness. But you overcame it. Like as you cope with your depression, the story ends happily and carrying hopes for the future. So. Ya. The story walked along with you for those year you were working on. I am happy that you find yourself in more comfortable situation. Sorry if I this makes you feel bad. Maybe my thought is too personal.

So. What I want to say is, thank you. Thanks for writing this fanfic. I enjoyed a lot. Thought a lot. This will be, this is one of the best fanfic I’ve ever read. Thank you. I hope you having great days in uni. Plus. Respecting you that successfully finishing IB. I’m starting IB next year and lol. Stressing me out already. Sorry if this is too long. Idk whether you will read my comment or not but thank you again. If there is mistake, grammar and spelling errors, that’s because my mother tongue is not English. Sorry for that. Anyway bye. Thanks for amazing fanfic.

Thats it? Aw whetever it was good. Also i blame the creator for wasting my weekend with this beautiful story. Thank you and goodnight

No just no i dont like that thats bad no please no

No

Ruled the land
HEEEEEEE HHHEEEE HEEEEHEEEEEEE

They never figured out how they killed themselves besides alphys who didnt say anything about pills

It is

Heya

This was longer than my grandmas line on the life support