| Reviews for Fox Point |
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Efadd chapter 2 . 10/23/2018 "and stop calling me LITTLE" Fullmetal Fennec |
Espada-001 chapter 17 . 7/17/2018 While I do enjoy reading this story I’m starting to wander after waiting this long if you’ve given up on this story. |
OMAC001 chapter 17 . 7/11/2018 Please update this soon! I want to see Zootopia's Council get their just desserts! |
NoXVZhuusox chapter 17 . 6/28/2018 Is this on hiatus or is it cancelled? |
TheCanadianStig chapter 17 . 1/25/2018 Just got introduced to this story and what can I say... absolutely love it! I'm really liking how these last few chapters are pulling more aspects of the Sly Cooper series. The way you tied Clockwerk and Bentley into the story is really enjoyable. Even with Sly, he's apart of the story even though he's bloody lost in time! It is interesting about how it will turn out, as I'm still unsure if this is a direct Zootopia Prequel or an AU on it's own. Either way it's really enjoyable. Quick question, where did the Hornaday character come from? I've seen it once before in another fanfic, and I'm just wondering if it was a Disney concept or came from the Zistopia fanfic (of which I'm embarrassed to say I haven't read yet). But anyways, keep up the good work! I hope you can keep this story alive, but I completely understand if it dies. And tbh, the amount of content per chapter is by far the most I've seen from the fanfics I've read. And none of it is useless rambling, really shows good writesmenship (is that a word?) |
Guest chapter 17 . 12/20/2017 I love this story! Keep going! |
Cerberusx chapter 17 . 10/12/2017 Seriously cannot understand how this doesn't have a couple hundred reviews. This is a freaking gem of a story! |
DeadlyShr1mp chapter 3 . 9/18/2017 I'm Super curious of the original(?) Of the Bacon you mentioned. Is it pork? |
Fairytale Lost chapter 17 . 9/18/2017 I must say that you're writing style is one of the best I've seen. It makes the story even more a pleasure to read and it makes it flow nice. I like the plot quite a bit, though I do get a little frustrated because of all the shit Carmelita is put through ( reading about brutal torture and/or abuse is much easier for me to read than about someone who survived so much being caught in red tape / politics and racism) . This brings me to my second point. Are you going to bring Sly back or are you really planning for Carmelita to be with Nick. Because that kind of fells wrong to me ( and I know this is not a good reason), especially after you written about Carmelita searching for Sly and believing him to be still alive. Plus, after all this shit she's been put through in just a couple of days I would think she deserves a break and even though they're similar Nick simply isn't Sly. Sorry for yammering about what I think the pairing should be, you probably get that a lot. |
chronocrosser chapter 17 . 6/24/2017 Great Chapter. You've done it again. It's nice to see some old faces from the Sly games and I see they will soon be making trips to Zootopia in droves. As for that mystory figure I find myself trying to guess who he or she is but coming up with bupkis. Looking forward to seeing who it is. |
Aztetos chapter 17 . 6/4/2017 A-Hahaha! You are back.:D We have missed you. Good luck writing and hopefully we shall read something from you soon again! |
speedyready chapter 17 . 6/4/2017 love it! |
Alan Marsters chapter 17 . 6/1/2017 OMFG SO GLAD YA BACK! |
J Shute chapter 17 . 6/1/2017 YESSSSS! TODAY IS A GOOD DAY! First a different path updating, and then HOLY GOUDA IS THE FOX POINT? And how long even is this chapter? It's both a hell of a deal longer than the 14K one I published yesterday (judged from scroller size) as well as a lot denser. I'm pretty sure it's over 20K, though I'd be interested to know. Regardless, it doesn't trade quantity for quality by a long shot and I was able to read this all, pretty much end to end, in what I think might have been one hour. While I was smiling throughout, I did give a decent giggle at the 'pants solidarity' bit... and full on laughed out loud when Bogo revealed that Honey did his taxes! Deadpan humor ftw! (I also got the nice Back to the future reference, though given that Bentley built that powersource himself it raises the question of why he doesn't just go public and solve the worlds frickin' energy crisis... (Seriously, that's literally the kind of power you expect out of an averaged sized nuke!)) Anyway, interesting to find out about the 'death' cliffhanger in the last chapter. Your full ham cave-lionfart is on point (I will get my scientists to build me a chair that I can be buried with!) and I just love that the councilmammals have just signed their death-warrants. Oh, I just wish that I was in Bellweathers place... looking in on it all, sipping a good wine while the rains of castamere play in the background. Anyway, real life can be a pain in the arse but glad to know that you're back. I look forward greatly to seeing where this goes on. |
Zeakagirl chapter 16 . 5/20/2017 Nicely done on this fic so far. Though now, I kind of want to play the Sly Cooper games again. |