I like the prospect, and hope you return soon. But I have some points I'd like to make. 1. A Yajhuta is not as tall or as strong as an Elite, Elites are on average 8'4" tall, while they only get to a little over seven feet. 2. There is no way a Brute was one spotted, Brutes can take an obscene ammount of punishment. 3. The Spartans are rather OOC. Especially Noble Six. 4.A Spartan could easily kill a Yajhuta, just in case you decide to pit them against each other at some point. Other than that, could chapter. Come back soon.

This story Is Interesting and i like It. When will the next chapter release?.

Please tell me this isn't dead, this has SO much potential.

Interesting premise. Hopefully you continue.

Cool I hope this isn't dead.

Awesome story! Two things though, will Xenomorphs and Flood ever duke it out and please try to spread words out, hearing "civs" 3 times in one paragraph gets a tad agrivating.

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Sir I for one rarely leave review's but I must say I see potential in this story and. I am curious to see how this pans out, "you sir had my curiosity but now you have my attention"

me like

very good beginning for the story , i suspect that they will help mankind , upgrading the warships with their tech , that will allow Mankind to start pushing back the damned covenant, and liberate occupied planets ,and re -terraform glassed planets , Cant hardly wait for the next chapters

Isn't the Pillar of Autumn a cruiser

Isn't the Pillar of Autumn a cruiser

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I love it.

This is a good start, hope you continue writing.