great story

I like this story very much, I hope you are ok and that you update soon

I can just imagine Dan walking in like "Hey I forgot my - HOLY SONAFABITCH YOU'RE DEAD WTF WAS IN THAT TAKEAWAY?!"

...maybe I should get a life.

When it said he died I had the rather amusing mental image of him in the morgue whirling around clawing at his new wings and freezing in place when someone walks in the place. The mortician's cowering in the corner and silence befalls the room. Lucifer wonders for a moment if he should fall to the ground and play dead, but the thought is quickly dismissed.

I hope you know that your story doesn't make sense
It's always the same Lucifer. he would know that Chloe was born to kill him if it happened before
And nobody wants to kill Lucifer
Your are writing bullshit
Don't know how you get those ideas but you should think about it before writing
or at least read it before uploading

Bravo! The first few chapters were a bit rough, but drew me in. This story is amazing and very well written. I hope you're out of the hospital and doing better. I look forward to the continuation of this story. Very well done!

hi! Just found ur story and am in love with it. Hope you update soon.

Please updateeeeee, it really is going great! :)) I like the plot and all. 3

I fell in love with this story :) please continue.

Please continue this story?

Please update!

Still very good, even reading it again.

Love It no matter how many times I read it.

More, please.

Very has become a parent!