Yo! Been a while!
This story is a nice follow up from Dirty Little Secret. I like how you mention that Paul's character suggests that he doesn't realize that he's loved Dawn for a long time, but everyone-most importantly Dawn-noticed that. All the characters are well-written and I like the sweetness of the story, and it's a good thing it's not sappy enough enough to make me want to choke the life out of the characters LOL (really hate super sappy people and situations). An anxious Paul and an easygoing Dawn makes it lighthearted and with just a tad of tugging at my soft side. Can't wait to see more of your writing!

theasianwonder

;; so cute aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I love how Dawn was the chill one and Paul was a wreck inside lol

I thought Paul is going to propose her.
It was sweet!