Reviews for The Man In The Shadows
Coreenm chapter 7 . 10/26/2019
Excellent story. Thank you.
SavhCaro chapter 1 . 10/30/2016
Well done. I look forward to more...
justayellowumbrella chapter 7 . 10/29/2016
I really liked the mood you set with this. What a melancholy tale, even with the return of Nia's daughter... For such a brief story, this had a lot of depth. Also enjoyed the distance the narration had from TMITS. I think that was part of what set the mood. But now, no updates to look forward to from you! I truly hope there is more to come!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/29/2016
Thank you so much! This is the hope I was hoping for!
justayellowumbrella chapter 5 . 10/27/2016
Was so excited to see an update from you! Excellent chapter: the ever haunting mood, TMITS moving with deadly grace ... the image of him stealthily hunting, black trench coat flapping around his menacing form. I need to know what happens next. Please update soon!
Souhashi27 chapter 5 . 10/27/2016
"If she looks long enough she sees how he has died a thousand deaths that were not his own" That line did it for me. Excellent writing.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/26/2016
Your writing is wonderful, but please, start giving us a little more hope, will you?
Ophite68 chapter 4 . 7/29/2016
Very nice.
justayellowumbrella chapter 4 . 7/17/2016
I have so missed the Man in the Suit and the mysteries surrounding him. Thank you for bringing him back. An angel of light and dark indeed. Enjoying the build up here and looking forward to more.
Souhashi27 chapter 3 . 6/21/2016
Your vision of Samaritan is well and truly terrifying. I look forward to more. :)
justayellowumbrella chapter 3 . 6/19/2016
"The little boy's face hovered in her vision. So did his Mother's. So did the others. She remembered them all."

Oh the layers keep building...Beautifully written.
justayellowumbrella chapter 2 . 6/9/2016
Wow.

Beautiful and tragic, at the same time. Your writing has reached a poetic level. The newspaper, first free and flapping in the wind, then still and wet. A fantastic symbol...

Oh my heart.
EuropeanPOInewbie chapter 2 . 6/8/2016
So nightmarish... superb description!
ypj50401 chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
Wow! This is beautiful descriptive and a powerful summary of the situation PLEASE continue.
justayellowumbrella chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
Ahhh! A story from TheHiddenMemory!

*jumps up and down*

This is beautifully written. Color me intrigued at the mood you have set here... Very intrigued. Your style is very captivating.

"... a malaise that existed not in what was present but rather in what was not." Wow.

Can't wait to see where this goes...