From everything that was written Dumbledore needs to be killed along with all the Witches and Wizards who went along with this wring doing. Dumbledore needs to learn he is no better than Voldemort. I'm sorry but this All of the Order needs to be put to death. Harry needs to stop this acting. He needs to turn in them and point out what they are doing wrong that they have destroyed and being sent to the fields of punishment. You are allowing wrongdoing by not calling out the wrongdoing you are going along with it this disgusts me. By not having Harry call out everything they are doing. Light Dark or Neutral The British Wizarding Community need to be put to death leaving only the no-human magic races to all that is left. Along with the non-magic users. As I see it in your story The Human Magic users are completely void of any kind of understanding of good and evil, right and wrong with proper morals and ethics. And sadly I have seen far too many authors writing stories lacking any kind proper morals and ethics condoning wrongdoing/evil rather than standing up for what is right and good. Plus I do not like people who are against the death penalty that shows that one's crimes sins are so great that they are a danger to everyone and thus need to be put to death. Plus many who are against the death penalty don't even think about say the murder victims and their families. And I have had relatives who have been murdered. Plus I have had many friends who have lists lived ones to murder and any other crime deserving of death. Heck In California and many other states and for a long time even at the federal level the penalty for kidnapping and abduction is death. To and internet search for yourself and find out. Plus it has been over a year since the last update.

You have a spelling Error You wrote killing cure which should be killing curse.

Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon

A very twisted story but I can’t help but want to see what happens next!

This is looking really good, and I hope you update and continue it one day. 8 - )

I had really hoped that your story would be as great as the 1st chapter promised, but then it had to become a typical Manipulative, Potion-drugging, Evil Dumbledore.

I find it also rather plot-convenient that Goblins can detect his lineage after it was specifically hidden by Hecate, the goddess of magic herself. You stated yourself that they will appear for all intents and purposes as HUMAN, so why would Goblin magic show his godly parentage?

That leads also to my disbelief that normal potions and spells could affect him, because if he is the son of 2 gods why shouldn't he have their immunity? So, is he human or godly, because both thesis are suppported in your story.

Best regards,
Mike

Love it

honestly, it ruined your whole story

Honestly, I read this and it started of amazing till we got to the freaking dna test, having all those potions given to harry potter is soo OOC for dumbledore and the wealsey, I was sooo hoping that this could be close to canon with personality and relationships!

Hecate is going to love hearing how these idiots abused her gift...

Different story have you ever thought of pairing Harry with Percy Jackson? hope you update

love the story can't wait for more

please update.

hope to see an update soon

Poor Harry! I can't wait to see more now! Update again soon please!