Can't wait for the next chapter. hope Kate is better soon

I was wondering where Ryan was, plus aren't Max's parents a bit too chill with their daughter having sex? But loving this story I am interested with what will happen with Kate, will Other Max make a appearance?

I hope Kristen and max make up properly and become best friends again

You'd think Kate's father would drop everything and race to collect his daughter? Or keep close contact atleast?

I like the ideas you have. And I'd like to keep reading this story but in my opinion you're kinda rushing with the plot and the dialogs which makes me stop reading your you can work on being more descriptive. Describing the emotions Chloe and Max have in general and while talking, more drama. Keeping the story realistic and not as simple as it's right now. This'd basically improve your stories quality, keep them interesting and give the reader more opportunities to imagine the surroundings and background noises. It's obviously a dreamy way of facing problems Max and Chlor have. Otherwise it might be exactly what you wanna do. Still, I'm this kind of person who likes to read realistic LiS FanFics including a lot of feels created by conflicts, misunderstanding. Another point is the amount of swears and 'fuck(ingyou're using. Maybe you could reduce them to let the story be read more fluently. But in the end it's for you to decide how to write stories. Eventually I'll start rereading your story when there'll be more for my English since it's not my native tongue and it's already late over here :D

Can't believe I forgot to review before this is a great story and that is a great cliffhanger

Whoa.. this chapter is amazing, very nice writing I can tell you worked hard on this one :D

Wow! Such a great story! Sure, there are a few kinks you could work out but what story doesn't have those? I want to focus on what you did right!
The writing was detailed and pretty damn easy to follow.
You kept up with the characters' personality for the most part, save for some things for Max's character.
I love the idea of Max getting purple hair and a lip ring at Chloe's request! But that stuff would take more than a few hours and for the tattoo at least you need to plan ahead lol!
Finally, the writing in general is pretty amazing overall. Keep up the good work!

Nice writing! A bit prosaic on the style, you could whats the word ... embellish? a bit more, flesh the story out, add fluff or something.

So far this is awesome but I think it can use some work, k? so hear me out you should not make things happen so quickly like the part when Chloe says "Fuck you Max you killed my mother" you should have let Chloe rant on and in later chapters Chloe fills guilty about how she acted since now she knows Max has been through a lot, that would have been realistic but Chloe forgiving Max in 10 seconds is not realistic. See what I mean? I'm only saying this because I can see this being a very amazing story just try a little harder k? 0
(PS. ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE SO MY GRAMMER IS HORRIBLE)