Really can't read your story anymore thanks for the first 2 chapters though.
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First chapter was interesting and then you made the 2nd chapter and you instantly lost any kind of interest I had as a reader in this crossover.

...why did you nerf Naruto?

Try a naruto crossover digimon tri fanfiction were naruto is a new student at the digidestins high school , but has a secret, he doesn't know that he has the crest of light and darkness in him. Is two digipathner can be form the royal knights or the seven demon Lords, for the light crest it's power can cure an infected digimon while the dark can corrupt a digimon to dark digivovle. good/evil naruto due to the crests, parring Kari..

Yo

Guys don't have wombs.
That's a gender specific ...organ? *looks online*
Yes, organ.
So this Naruto cannot have a womb.
That is all.

good chapter.
so finally deidara work for that bastard aizen.
and naruto met a weird hollow (sasuke? bijuu?)
can't waitnext chapter

Most of this story makes no sense.

interesting chapter.
so naruto have new memory of his past.
and the end is interesting, but a question: it is the good orochimaru from gaiden working for konaha R&D branch?

Laughing my ass off over all them reviews. The title is 'Death is Irrelevant',yet they still bitch on how the MC dies. Hey,reviewers! Here's a tip when reading a new fanfic,unless you felt otherwise,throw your knowledge over the series involved out the window,it'll make more sense!
This is a good fanfic,lots of characters stay true to their origin character with the fun element added. Keeps ya on your toe and throws at you things you don't expect. Sad not many have yet noticed this. Until next binge-reading! See ya!

good chapter.
so look naruto remember about his past.
ask why naruto and dei, don't recall the shinigami that kuchiki clan was the first to steal biwako?

Impressive man..
Will be waiting for the next chapter

This is really good, excited to next chapter!

Is this retardation gonna be over soon? We already saw their asses getting kicked once, you've driven the point on. MOVE ON.

interesting chapter.
so deidara is dead.
Naruto is right to be pissed off again ginrei. After all he killed deidara for a supposed thievery, but naruto and the poor guy only come here to get back the ring ginrei stolen first from biwako.
And look like kurama is back, ask if naruto will remember his former life.
can't wait next chapter with an unleashed pissed jinchuriki.

Otherwise, i'am little confused with bleach timeline. This story take place near bleach manga timeline or dozen years before when rukia or hitsugaya weren't even born?

Frankly, you've really could've done better with Deidara's death. It was just plain lazy how you did it. Hell, it was damn near unnoticeable, as in I could've literally missed it if I was skimming even just a little bit, and it didn't even make me feel anything.

Not to mention that Naruto's own death doesn't even make sense. One, he's survived much worse than some sword stab, and he wasn't even stabbed in thee heart. Two, not even getting stabbed in the heart would kill him since it can take several minutes to actually die from such a thing, not to mention that Naruto can easily regenerate his organs, bones, and flesh in mere seconds (and even other Naruto characters have survived quite a while with their hearts either pierced through or entirely destroyed). Three, it's BS that the killer could even get through his sensing at all, let alone getting hit.

Why would Naruto even need to be killed? That accomplishes absolutely nothing since he would be far stronger alive and he can interact with shinigami and other spirit beings anyway, even go to the Soul Society some other way if that's what's necessary. Seriously, everything about Naruto's death was absolute bullshit.

However, in spite of all that, this fic actually does manage to be enjoyable. I still will not excuse bad writing, though.

And the heavens shall tremble! XD

That's what I picture will happen next chapter.

Curious if Naruto is gonna kill Ginrei now or destroy most of the compound from unleashing some of Kurama's power, if he does start to use a little bit of it.

Naruto about to throw down 2 well known captains of the Gotei will definitely get their attention and it looks like Naruto is not going to align towards the Gotei side right now since Deidara got killed.

Naruto is gonna have to return Deidara's body to Biwako and might leave her service from the combined feeling of guilt and what was gained was not worth the cost.

Anyway, Naruto is gonna be angry for many reasons I feel the coming chapters.