This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more

Note to your Muse:
Dear Muse,
Please, please, please get back to work again! This story is worth finishing!
Thank you,
An avid reader

This shaping up to be a great story! The only skill I feel you missed is metamorphosis, since he grew his hair back as a child.

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

Lengthen these into actual chapters too jack off.

great story so far looking forward to more

An interesting plot to the story looking forward to future chapters
Thank you for sharing

Good start to a great story. Please do keep this one up!

it's not close to being against the law it is against the law.

This is great..but please no harry/hermonie pairings or harry/ginny pairings..please..I am glad that Sirius will be getting out soon...I do hope that Harry will spend some time getting to know his godfather...

Interesting; but several oopses.
Azkaban has no H. (Not Azkabahn.)
Wizengamot has only one N. (Not Wizengamont.)
Shacklebolt, not Shaklebolt
Hermione, not Hermoine. Her MY own knee.
You have formatting instructions remaining in the chapter texts, e.g. in ch. 3: "We are getting back on the 29supth/sup of August".
And here, in ch. 5, you have:
'this was not the style"mso-spacerun: yes;"/spanThe'
There are a few other examples of such elsewhere, and is probably due to uploading using a text or word-processing format not supported by ffnet. The upload page explains which formats should be used. Reading the chapters after you post them would show these format-code errors to you.
In this chapter, Hermione asks her parents to let Harry visit for a while after the Grangers return from their trip to France. But in ch. 3, you have Hermione telling Harry that the 3-week trip to France will be at the end of the holidays, and that she won't be back till August 29th. That would result in an extremely short visit, if they have to leave again on Sept. 1st. (I think you forgot about the earlier-mentioned vacation plans' dates.)
Having a beta is generally a good idea. You can't proofread a mistake that you don't realize you are making.
Keep it up!

Awesome chapter mate!

Interesting story good job!

i like your story. Thank you