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   Bohogal1998 chapter 4 . 12/5/2017 I don't know if you thought of this but Ziva Rarely uses contractions in her speaking. She would said That is not and she would say cannot not can't and she'd say I am not I'm. still love this story though |
| Bohogal1998 chapter 5 . 11/20/2017 Is this the END? Please tell me it isn't! The rest of the team needs to see her and Tony does too! you can't end it HERE! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/4/2016 UPDATEEEEE |
| NinjaCom chapter 5 . 7/1/2016 Ooh Orli has got a lot to answer for! So Ziva wanted Tony to know she was alive, hell yeah she would! I like how Gibbs is starting to talk to Ziva now and understand her perspective. Can't wait to see Tony's reaction to Ziva being there, I'd love to be a fly on the wall for that conversation! I like the little touches in this chapter: while Gibbs is still mad at Ziva for leaving and hiding Tali, she is still his kid. Love it :D |
| NinjaCom chapter 4 . 7/1/2016 Hello! I'm so sorry I'm so far behind on reading FF! So glad to see this posted, it's such a great lil chapter! Ooh cliff-hanger haha, gotta love them! You defo nailed the emotions of both Ziva and Gibbs in this chapter. Ziva has got a lot to answer for, but at the same time you really want to know her story and how the last 3 years have been for her. Keep up the fab writing! :D |
| Sue Dooley chapter 5 . 6/21/2016 Awesome! Fantastic story and writing. Tiva forever. |
| DS2010 chapter 5 . 6/21/2016 Yes Tony will take her back after he gets angry. |
| DS2010 chapter 4 . 6/21/2016 Someone had to tell her. Glad it was Gibbs even through the tears. |
| srhittson chapter 3 . 6/16/2016 Good story. Please update again soon |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/9/2016 Please post the next chapter I really want to find out what happens next |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/7/2016 You might what to edit the story because there are multiple spelling mistakes. I loved the chapter though and can you please post chapter 4 ASAP |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/5/2016 There are plausible answers to all those questions and your plot is also plausible. But don't rush it. This chapter needed some editing, your paragraphs needed sorting out. That way you could have got the pace to build a little ... Then snap to Ziva's point of view and her reveal. |
| Gaben chapter 1 . 6/5/2016 You ask some very pertinent questions. Though I haven't seen the episode yet I sort of guessed this could be a plot. Here in Aussie were only up to episode 18. Funny though I've just started my new chapter of my story. I had all ten chapters already titled over a year ago... Chapter 9 Abba. |
| Sue Dooley chapter 3 . 6/4/2016 Excellent! Tiva forever. |
| Debbie chapter 3 . 6/4/2016 Love the way you brought Ziva into the story. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
