I just love this chapter so much that it hurts
Gosh, terrific dialogues you've made here, brilliant work
I just want to see these two idiots coming to terms with their feelings, aaaa the tease

aww this was so heartbreaking. I was so happy and then that happened. I felt their pain.

Another excellent chapter! Looking forward to more!

Thank you for another great chapter of the collective denseness of Hiccup and Jack :D
I honestly think that your fic is one of the greatest I ever read, and every chapter makes me admire your writing skills more and more.
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :DDD

Shouldn't be green and blue for Jack and hiccup?

Another wonderful chapter! Keep up the great work!

Haha I liked that chapter a lot ! Finally, it's finally happening !

Hey!

So I have been reading your story since the 60 thousand word mark, and at this point I don't know how to tell you how much I apreciate it. It is going to a point, where I tend to almost mimic some of your writting trick when I write my own stories (the ones that probably will never get publish, because I am a never satisfied, busy person, but still). The main reason why I was interested to begin with, with the style was the fact that you were so smoothlely including so easely all those scientific references, and I loved that mix. The thing that I am the most impress about is...How do you manage to write for so long? And without loosing faith in your writting? Where do you find the time?

Anyway, your story (and you!) Are breathtaking! Have a wonderful day!

Finally !
Well I'm kinda surprised, you kept hiccup's prosthetic on the low key, so I always thought that he still had both his legs and would loose one later on the fic. But what you did was much smarter, very subtle !

Daaaaamn Can hiccup be dense !
Come on it's time he wakes up and realize he has the hots for white haired guys that hold his hands !
I particularly liked the part with the photos on hiccup's home, made me remember I need to start taking some, it's important to make memories

Hey! Sorry for the late review!
I really liked this chapter and the way things are moving. I'm a bit sad, though, because it feels like the story is getting close to the end. How many more chapters are you planning?
As a special note, I just want to say how much I loved the scene between Hiccup and his dad (almost made me cry a little, it was so sweet xd).
Keep up the great work! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Hey !
Long time no see ! I'm glad i'm finally able to resume reading this story, breaking my phone was a hard blow, i missed my favorite dorks !

Gods, I only now managed to read the last two chapters, it's been really stressful for me lately...
But reading your fic really took away some of the stress bc I could just tune out everything elseTo everyone who hasn't read the latest chapters yet: SPOILER ALERT BELOW

Before the spoiler-y stuff, though, your character development is really great and I loved to get lost in the fic again :D
And I rarely found a fic as long and well thought-out as yours and I honestly don't know how you're doing it, but it's great!
And now the spoiler-y stuff, it's adorable and a little funny how they still don't know that the other one loves them, too (though it's a bit frustrating to see them being so oblivious, but it's part of the fic's charm XD). I really wonder how much longer it's gonna take them to realise, or if they even realise it on their own at all or if someone is finally going to be fed up and just tells them. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters! XDD

Awesomeness! I accidentally dropped out of the story, but I picked it back up! Now I'm all caught up and eagerly waiting for more!

Please don't go to jail Emma