Lol too cute

...That's not how that works. That's not how any of this works...

I mean, I'm used to seeing fanf.. actually people in general, not understanding physiology in the slightest, but this is only the second time I've seen this particular, and painfully obvious, gross (and I mean that in both senses of the word) misunderstanding actually incorporated into a story, and the first was nearly 15 years ago.

I can't help but notice that this is not marked complete.

Interesting start, will this be continued?

Well this story is interesting and random. I mean, the part with maou all of a sudden showing up at emi apartment was random, and interesting because maou has discovered that he's attracted to emi, lol. Usually it's the other way around, so it's refreshing to see maou crushing on emi while emi is completely unaware of maou feelings towards her. Anyway, your writing is awesome can't wait for the next chapter!

thank ya for your story I'm a little bit confused with the topic, but still.. thank you

I enjoyed this throughly, they seemed mostly in character in my opinion. I'd say this works as a one shot but I really do hope that it continues. This is an awesome idea and it doesn't seem forced at all, thanks for writing.

Maou Emi fics are pretty rare to come by... Good ones even more let's see. In a way Maou and Emi didn't feel that OoC, but on the other side they do. I guess it's a good start, as long as this don't escalate quickly. A good building is one of the keys to a good story. The second one is characterisations. Have you read the novels? If you have t you can stop by at mittens-220 blog. She had translated vol 4 to 11 and I found a link to vol 3. As for the spoilers of vol 0 and 12 to 15 you should visit gonfier's tumblr.

Anyway, welcome to the fandom. I wonder if you'll be able to stay away from the well of cliche and predictable, which like 90% of the stories on this site can't seem to do.

Btw Maou is not immortal. Vol 15 spoilers confirmed that.

Have a nice day and keep practicing. :)

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I need more of this. Damn, I'm such a diehard MaouxEmi shipper... I just love how you described Maou's inner feelings.. truth is, demons are very lustful creatures, and Maou is no exception. I wonder how soon Emi will finally give in, haha... can't wait for these two to get dirty.
Yes, I'm a pervert. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter..