| Reviews for Small Drabbles |
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   Advait2003 chapter 4 . 7/30/2017 hmmmm... what about river/moon talking to marco on how to be a proper king/husband. |
| ElleFreak chapter 4 . 6/24/2016 Hey, that was so original an idea! I really liked it, and you still keep everyone in-character. The idea of the two of them bonding this way is really cool. Keep it up! |
| Guest Sorta chapter 4 . 6/23/2016 Jackie and Oscar would make a cute couple. |
| Omega Ultra chapter 2 . 6/12/2016 Another review to a different story in a one-shot collection? It's been a while since I've done that. Personally, I wish I could've seen the result, but since it's by definition a shorter story what you have is fine. Try working on inter-diaolge stuff. What I mean is the stuff you say, because I've noticed that Dialogue is fine. So rating... 8.75/10 This is an interesting score |
| KrissDomm chapter 3 . 6/11/2016 Yeah, you're right... There's a lot of Starco Fics (and a bunch of other ships) out there. And Star is a sadistic girl?! Niceeeee! Keep the TUBULAR work!... (wait, tubular? LOL) |
| ElleFreak chapter 3 . 6/11/2016 It's great you're showing new friendships in this story. Also, I could TOTALLY see Marco in such a poor mental state after watching horror movies (I can totally relate BTW). Good job as always! |
| Guest Sorta chapter 3 . 6/10/2016 Marco da wimp child! Mwahahaha! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2016 hilarious, not starco tho |
| Game Grumps chapter 2 . 6/7/2016 This is GRAND |
| SonicE1337 chapter 2 . 6/7/2016 Haha, well I never thought I'd see the day that Brittany wasn't a total b*tch. Good work! Everyone was in character and I always enjoy a little Karma every now and again. Keep up the good work Broseph! |
| KrissDomm chapter 2 . 6/7/2016 That's going to be an amazing party!... For Star, at least LOL, keep the good work! |
| ElleFreak chapter 2 . 6/7/2016 Amazing! I love how Brittney will get what she kinda deserves, but you still described Star very in-character; with always the best intentions. Great job, can't wait for more! |
| Guest Sorta chapter 2 . 6/7/2016 Oh sweet karma! Brittney deserves it. |
| KrissDomm chapter 1 . 6/5/2016 C'mon Marco, a D- is'nt that bad... Right? Great Fic! |
| Omega Ultra chapter 1 . 6/5/2016 Interesting concept. That's the simplest take I can have. I've noticed that you're doing surprisingly well character wise. Plot is simple and short (That's one of the reasons I came). So props. Since this is so short spelling and grammar is actually a major issue now. Remember, proofreading is hard, but when you have a short story mistakes become much more noticeable. So I say, I'm somewhat interested. Remember, your hardest job here is most likely making mundane interesting, so props if you can pull it off. I rate this first story a solid 8.5/10. PS: It doesn't matter much, but a drabble is usually around 100 words long. |
