| Reviews for A Series of Unfortunately Timed Showers |
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KieraRaelyn chapter 1 . 7/5 Aww, what? That's not an ending. I at least need the reveal scene. I wanted to see them realize ALL OF THIS had happened. Such mortification. It would be great. |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/10 I'm now imagining Gabriel timing his rants (and resulting butterflies) to try to ensure Ladybug encounters his son in the shower. I'm a bit unclear on the motive, maybe he hopes Adrien will invite her so he can lift the earrings by stealth? I don't know, but 8 times is pushing the boundaries of coincidence. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/10 The irony is that the rules specify the swimwear lack of coverage they do in order to make them *less* streamlined. Basically there are fabrics that have less drag in the water than human skin and because the sport's governing body didn't want it to turn into a technological arms race they limited the amount of the body that fabric was allowed to cover. Not that that helps Adrien in any way. He's stuck with awkward situations with Ladybug that are always funny for us and mortifying for them. Good thing it wasn't during Scarlet Moth's rampage or they'd have both probably been akumatized right then. |
violet lilaccs chapter 3 . 4/26 :D |
violet lilaccs chapter 2 . 4/26 LOL |
violet lilaccs chapter 1 . 4/26 lol. |
Loveydove chapter 3 . 12/9/2019 You should do one where she accidentally deteansforms when she tries to get him out |
Jane the fan chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 I love this! Please continue! |
Daisydoodle820 chapter 3 . 4/27/2019 There are no speedos in Antartica. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/7/2018 this was hilarious! Can you do a reveal? |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/17/2018 I was half expecting Adrien to go "right, you know what, fuck it. Plagg, claws out. Right then, my lady, let's go." Proceed to drag a stunned mullet looking Ladybug behind him as he jumps out the window. Who else was waiting on that? |
marauderluverz chapter 3 . 7/25/2018 This story was so freaking hilarious! poor adrien always getting interrupted in the shower! Lol. |
ComicCat321 chapter 3 . 4/11/2018 Hey, if you’re up to it can you do a final Marichat chapter where the roles are reversed? Like, an Akuma after Mari and Chat having to come to the rescue at a BAD time? It would be pretty funny. Beautiful story, and I hope you take up my suggestion but no pressure! |
meowziy chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 Can you PLEASE do a MariChat chapter where the roles are reversed and Marinette is wearing something Chat Noir themed PLEASE?! Great story by the way |
Dragon of Winter chapter 3 . 11/20/2017 Oh this was priceless, I was laughing so hard I was crying. :) |