Reviews for Long Live The King
Mini Nicka chapter 1 . 4/16
This made me laugh hysterically and was beyond perfect
eriv del chapter 1 . 3/2/2019
great JESUS bless he loves u prayin 4 u
BV4ever chapter 1 . 10/11/2018
Bow down Saiyan bitches to Queen B! Long live King Vegeta...husband to Queen Bulma and father to Prince Trunks! So loved this story!
Shizzy92 chapter 1 . 8/22/2018
Kid Trunks is such a little shit. Thank you for that ending.
bulmalovevegeta chapter 1 . 7/23/2018
omg...this story is amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
Incredible, how on earth did you come up with the name Echalot before Vegeta proposed to name Bulla this? Was it a coincidence?
Love your work.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
Ah, perfection. You do so right by Bulma and it makes your stories such a treat to read.

Pity this disregards DBS - I mean I can see why you would, but there’s extra hilarity in the image of Vegeta going godmode when Trunks parrots King V’s insult.

Also, AHAHAHAHA THE THING omg. Only Goku...
Crash22244 chapter 1 . 4/5/2018
haha, the ending was the best.
PyrothTenka chapter 1 . 4/2/2018
Aww... this was super sweet and funny and awesome. I was looking for a good DBZ fic to read and here I found one. Trunks was my favorite. He usually is. Except for Goten when he's done right, but Goten's character can be tricky to nail down.

Not a fan of all the language in it, but I'm just weirdly picky about that. You still did a good job of keeping the insults from repeating themselves, that's far better than most.

Thanks for sharing this lovely story! :)
-Py
Zombeeninja chapter 1 . 2/19/2018
Okay, so I don't typically review, but this was just so good to pass up!
First of all, I love your writing style and the way you wrote the characters out to be!
A little sad we didn't get to see more King Vegeta beating the shit out of old King Vegeta though lol!
This just, ah! 100000/10 seriously no words just squeals!
Thank you so much by blessing me with this.
:) I hope you're having a wonderful day/night you amazing human you!
Amlith chapter 1 . 2/17/2018
This is absolutely one of my favorite fanfics of all time
DBZBV1991 chapter 1 . 1/27/2018
OMG! I didn't know I needed this in my life but now I can't live without it! This is an amazing story. Your characterisations are great and your style of writing is soooo good. I had to laugh so hard over the cause of the story and especially the ending had me rolling on the floor xD I love every part of it! Maybe you decide to include more chapters? Maybe the Saiyans stay or try to get their home planet back? I'd read the shit out of it, believe me! :D
Lilaho chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
This story is so great. I had to laugh several times, it is just awesome. Bulma and Trunks are so witty.
Thank you so much for this story
Emmy Tee chapter 1 . 11/21/2017
Omg this story gave me life. I’d always imagined what would happen if either King Vegeta or Bardock came back to life. This gave me everything I couldn’t have imagined and more! I kinda wish this would continue though. I’d love to see if now “former” King Vegeta plans to spend time getting to know the extension of his family and how that would go.
LeChick chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
This is so fucking beautiful
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