Reviews for Humble Refusal
oceanole chapter 1 . 8/22/2019
like itt!
JayMyBoy chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
Did the guy at the end have to pay for Luffy’s meal?
VampireApple chapter 1 . 2/4/2019
This is so cute! I love the loyalty here, not only what the crew has for Luffy, but what Luffy has for the crew.
RRRR777 chapter 1 . 7/8/2018
Straw Hats are a loyal bunch. And you showed that perfectly.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 1 . 10/30/2016
Very good
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Grease Monkeys? XD LOL Great story
Apollo's Raven 432 chapter 1 . 8/24/2016
I really like this one shot. And CAN I HAVE MORE MORE COOKIES PLEASE!
takedigi chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
Wonderful. It has been incredible this fic. Friendship, Family. I love these kinds of stories. And the ending has been impressive.

The manga has been very interesting. I hope to see the Straw Hats together again.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
DUUUUDE! SO sorry this review is so late, but I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! All the individual times the Straw Hats are recruited are so unique and fitting and ENTICING, but THEY TURN THEM DOWN because they have Luffy, and that's all they need, all they want, all they're living for! AHHHH! INCREDIBLE! You're SO AWESOME! That goes for the way they refuse, too, and then LUFFY'S at the end! WOO! Rock on! The emotion, simplicity, BEAUTY of all this is just SO amazing! Rock on!
kuro02 chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
my best kind of stories
Not-a-fanatic-just-a-fan chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
That was so cute!
FlamingFoxNinja chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
this is so cool u love it. I also liked that the guy talking to usopp was gonzo, like the muppets. that was great
Awsme Grl chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
This was nicely done! I loved how each crewmate had their own scenario with different offers and the fact that they didn't hesitate to refuse. Awesome writing!

Didn't expect Luffy at the end to be offered something. That was a nice twist! *Thumbs up*
I'm adding this fanfic to my favourites.

-Awsme Grl ;)
xMousex chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
Awe! How lovely! This could easily slide into canon One Piece manga tbh. And I especially loved the ending, where Luffy stated that he already had a crew. This story just shows how much faith they put into each other and just how much all of them have changed. You did an amazing job
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
...I feel afraid, actually afraid, at the idea of Luffy finding an island like that...

One suggestion, what you have here is a bunch of people who already had an idea of the various crewmembers. What about the marines talking about their profiles for each of them?

Thanks for the cookies!