| Reviews for Revelation |
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clestourgeon31 chapter 3 . 2/8/2019 Great story so far! Love it! |
Sunny ver 2.0 chapter 3 . 8/10/2016 Amazing! I hope you update soon |
Sanban chapter 3 . 7/21/2016 Really like this! Can't wait for more! |
Teyona chapter 3 . 6/22/2016 Wow this was a pretty intense beginning I just love how everything is plausible. I feel for Kakashi, hopefully he stays around for the long run with Sakura. Even though it's only been three chapters I feel so addicted and now I need to know what she has in plan. Please continue updating because I need to keep reading this! Thanks for the update though~ |
Nikki1212 chapter 1 . 6/17/2016 I like this! But there were two mistakes that stuck out to me the most: you spelled "Godaime" as Godamine and you mentioned that Tsunade is the granddaughter of the Third Hokage. I don't know if that's intentional to fit your story, as I'm only on the first chapter lol, but Tsunade is a Senju which means she is the First Hokage's granddaughter. If she were the Third Hokage's granddaughter she'd have to be Asuma's daughter lol and a Sarutobi! Besides that, and a few superfluous details, this fic looks good! |
Bibikitten986 chapter 3 . 6/15/2016 oh I love this!. disregard that horrible review. about self insert... clearly that person is dissolutioned themselves. because obviously this isnt that. its well written and I believe you've done a good job at portraying sakura. I can't wait for her interaction with itachi. I feel it may be coming up |
Grace chapter 3 . 6/13/2016 So I'm betting she'll be meeting Itachi soon I would ignore the guest reviews, there's a certain one that leaves nasty comments to generally any pairing other than Sakura and Sasuke, write how you want to write. i probably should of logged in right lol, but it's a good story so far, I'd like to see how it progresses. |
guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2016 what we want to know is... what is the pairing? i'm hoping it's itachixsakura because sakuraxkakashi is super gross lol |
Emily D' Lu chapter 3 . 6/12/2016 This story is so interesting and original, i am expecting for the next chapter :) |
UltimoFiore chapter 1 . 6/11/2016 To the commenter below, Thank you for your review! If you weren't anonymous I would message you. I am generally a pretty easy going person so I appreciate all reviews, even the bad ones. I'd love to hear your suggestions in a PM and what parts of the story you are pertaining to exactly. I'm not perfect writer which is why I am on here in the first place - to improve. Thanks for your time! (: |
guest chapter 3 . 6/11/2016 Ever heard of tags? Use them. No one wants to read about your pathetic delusional self-insert crack ship. |
The Plague Doctor chapter 3 . 6/11/2016 I'm really liking this story! Can't believe it doesn't have more reviews or follows. Can't wait for more ;) |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/11/2016 This is very good! Keep it up! |
animeluver37 chapter 2 . 6/9/2016 I love this. your writing style is excellent. I've never been a fan of Sakura and Kakashi but the way you write makes them sound good! |
Synthetic Paradise chapter 1 . 5/30/2016 Whoa. Well planned. Thoroughly and perfectly explained, albeit wordy. And I speak for all when I say this caught the interest of anyone who has interest in the history of the Uchiha clan and politics in the Naruto world. This is the part where I'd give advice, but the chapter was so long, some parts are easily forgetful. So there's my advice, make future chapters shorter. This one is good as a hook, but is not comfortable to read in general. I'd say seven thousand words or less per chapter. Other than that, it looks good, and kept my interest to the very end. I'll follow for now. Keep up the good work. Ciao! |