*steadily becomes a hardcore frans shipper* thanks author uhuhuhu

Ah, this story was the best, especially after the slightly (much) darker themes in Dream the light hearted feel of this fic was refreshing. Chara was by far my favorite part of this story, they were hilarious and so loyal to frisk, the rivalry between Chara and Sans is entertaining, i can just image them at school passivly agressinvly arguing over Frisk. You're a great writer and I really really hope you do more work on this universe.

I honestly come back and read this on occasions. I love it a lot

OMG I KNEW IT. GASTER -IS- THE SKELETON DAD. 8D
Okay, just kidding. - Or nah, half kidding.

Anyway, it's 5am and I'm so glad that I found at the very last something that didn't break my heart. I couldn't sleep until now bc of my hurting heart. T-T
To think of Sans being tanned is... Unfamiliar with me. I didn't expect that.
Man, and stubbles? And oh God Frisk, what are you doing? So evil~ I guess I blushed a little bit, maybe bc I still have that cute little Frisk and boney Sans before my inner eyes.
At least some kind of happy end. That have to work for this night.

Anyways, it was a bit less feely and more passionate, but that was such an great chapt. Man, I wouldn't mind an whole fanfic in this universe. I thought first I would mind, but I wouldn't. So, if you, by any chance, would write someday that... I'm here for it!

*GRINNING MANICALLY THEN SCREAMING HYSTERICALLY*

OH THAT WAS TOO PRECIOUS.

THE FLUFF. THE FLUFF!

OH MY HEART.

*DIES*

Right now the main thing going through my mind is Sans' voice blips, repeating.
heheheheheheheheheheh

You know...
We need more Chara.
I don't care what Chara AU thing it is...
but the way you write Chara is totally awesome and hilarious.
pls.

I love this series sooo much! I did not see this kind of ending coming! ITS SO CUTE!
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I love overprotective Chara! I also love Chara and sans hate-friendship relationship! Usually I don't ship frisk and sans and see them more of a brotherly relationship (I still think frisk is gender neutral though) BUT THIS FIC MADE MEH LOVE THEM TOGETHER! So cute :3

Also I agree with the one who suggested a rating change. Since the first part is sort of adult themed.

Too cute/10

Thoughts Before Finishing the Fic:

you've totally won me over with shipping this alternate, futuristic reality. 10/10. you impress me endlessly.

"you know how cops are with me."
*as the reader, looks up and thinks of previous fanfiction* heh heh heh . . . reference. i am pleased

chara is like that stray cat you adopt from the animal shelter that hates you and hates everyone, but then grows to love you and protect you from everyone and hates you for it.

After Finishing Fic:

I don't think I've ever read a fanfiction where i enjoy Chara as a character, like. . . ever. But this one won me over, darn you. xD Chara was literally the best part of the entire fic for me. Of course i totally gushed over sansxfrisk because ishipthisonetothemoon,yo but omg words cannot describe how much i enjoyed this character angle for Chara you doNT uNDErsTanD seriously though x3

lovely fic, all across the board. i like it way too much. i had to stop a few times while reading it to look away and scream quietly and try not to giggle like a small schoolgirl because FLUFF gets me every time; i cannot escape it. it's 11 at night i mean jeez louise i need to stop doing this to myself.

i eagerly await your next undertale fics! thanks for sharing this lovely one-shot with us! :)

okay I'm so here for protective older sibling Chara

This is high quality ending stuff

if you ever feel inclined to write stuff where Frisk introduces Sans to their family as their Official Boyfriend and Chara and Sans are lowkey fighting. Like they have a handshake that goes on for too long and too hard to see who pulls away first. They play highkey competetive pingpong. the rest of the fam is just exasperatedly watching Chara and Sans engage in petty little fights (kinda like befriending Undyne in the pacifist run.) ((oh gosh I got carried away here im sorry)

BUT YEAH if you ever get the urge to write something like that don't hold back :D

I swear, your fan fictions are the best I've ever read.
And I've read a lot of fanfics.
Your abilities are among the best, and you should get a medal. This story almost brought me to tears and I'm normally a very 'stoic' person, as I've been told.

I love the idea of this in general, it's perfect.

I just really wish you write more stories like these, 'cause lots of people love them!

-YellowPikachuchu

This is so cute! Ahhh! I love it so much!

If It's Too Much To Ask Ignore, But I Would Love Sans' Point Of View.

This is going to be a pretty quick review, as I really only have one word that can sum this fic up... FINALLY! (I'd maybe think about rating the story as T rather than K though since there are some references to less 'innocent' feelings.