Reviews for My version of Chapter 27 of the book Me before you
Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2017
Wow! Thank you so much for that. It was so tastefully done. I appreciate the time and perspective that their lives together afforded them. I love that Will left the world fighting with Louisa by his side-very fitting for who they were together. Well done.
ninewood chapter 2 . 9/25/2016
Sad, but lovely.
ninewood chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
Yes, this is what I wanted him to say in the movie!
jansails chapter 2 . 7/21/2016
Beautiful, & realistic.
jansails /jan2
kaiyasara1 chapter 2 . 7/2/2016
better ending than the original...yeah he was not going to live long do to his condition but this way to go is is hard i believe to live like that,but we have to remember we are not alone and we must keep fighting for the ones we love and love us!
kaiyasara1 chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
exactly!this was supposed to happen!
Binibini01 chapter 2 . 7/2/2016
I don't know how to possibly say that this is wonderful. This made me cry all over again; but not the sad one. Crying because some part of me longs for Will, yet smiling knowing that at least in this au, he choose to live and be happy with Lou. My gods, thank you for this. :)
Ser Brienne chapter 2 . 6/15/2016
He dies what! I thought you were going to write happy fanfic! Good job! Sorry to any people who I just spoiled...
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2016
Thank you. That ending has been killing me since I read the book and this healed me in a way... More details about what they did all that time would be great. Seriously!
ReaderBee chapter 2 . 6/9/2016
I finishe the book a few days ago and told one of my friends (who read the book as well) that I'd have rather Will succumbing to an illness than going to Dignitas. I'd much rather him giving Lou a chance and her knowing that she was loved as well.
But hey this is a really intense topic and I get everyone's point of view. You are truly great with words. Hope you do a full on fic. It'd be great and I'd totally read it!
Thanks for sharing :)
rapunzelclayre chapter 2 . 6/8/2016
great!
may96 chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
I love it.
Nataly29 chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
OmG! Thanks you for this chapter, I am crying again. this is sad ending too but at least they have happy days together and a wonderful daughter.
crazyinlover chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
OH MY GOSH! Please update soon! Pleaee because i couldnt breathe after reading the book because i was crying to much and right now i feel empty after watching the movie! This one brought feeling back! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
Yay I finally found an alternative ending! Were you going to add any more chapters? I'd love to read what happens next, but if you don't that's cool too because then it leaves the reader to continue it in their imagination & aallows them to decide what happens next.
20 | Page 1 2 Next »