Omfg, I feel so sorry for Harry.

Awe that ending was so good!
Made me sad.
Which is good!
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I liked the military set up but you can't just have everyone being called general like that.
There's level of station too that must be addressed when they're all amassed like that.
Lutienant, second lutienant, colonel, brigadier colonel, major, major general, brigadier general, private, private general, commander, commander in chief, etc.
I understand very little of military ranking beyond the very basics, but yeah, they can't all be general. They can be generals and second generals and brigadier generals, because of how low in the system they are, which other general they are under, what squadron they're in command of. Harry is the commander here, yeah? You have a second in command after that, your brig general, who has your team of luitenients and majors in hand. Then you have the generals who have THEIR luitenients and majors, and then their privates and so on.
All those "generals" would unlikely be there at the same time with how small their resistance seems, not only is that a LOT of generals, but that's a lot fewer teams than I would expect. There are lots and lots of colonels and luitenients, they have their own teams under generals, and brigadier generals are the ones who speak with the generals and the commanders.
So it should have been about 10 people there max who were just being referred to as general, as they'd all be assumed and recognized as having the same status to some effect and there's no need to specify beyond that for any reason but respect (so they always say it cuz it's offensive not to.). Everyone else would be assumed civilians working with them, or colonels and luitenients who are very important to these missions and are getting orders straight from the leader bc they don't have time to set up all these seperate meetings and let orders trickle down the lines.
Uh, none of that stuff REALLY matters, it was just kind of silly to see all these people under the same division (assumably) be generals and have the same rank and job.. It was so repetitive!
Please don't take that as a solid knock to your story, I really love it and am looking forward to reading more, it's just, especially with the comparison of supernatural guys having a pretty set order of command without calling each other by rank it was odd to see one where I didn't expect it. Obviously this is very different, so I understand, it just wasn't what I was expecting.
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I loved it! Just so amazing!

I'm turning July into an unofficial author appreciation month! So that means that whosoever stories I read this month I'm going to let them know how much I appreciate them sharing their stories with the world. It'd be really awesome if we are able to share the love too, as I know more and more people have seemingly forgotten that authors are people with thoughts and feelings and deserving of our praise. I'm not quite sure how to go about this but I want you to know how much of an amazing author you are. Its super neat how much background you seem to be giving Hadarea and the details are phenomenal

Very intrigued about how she'll pull this off.

twilight zone indeed. going from constant hunting to a preppy home is culture shock to the extreme. i wonder how long she can convince herself that acting is a good thing? nice chapter!

There is so much confusion here it's ridiculous. Not a criticism at all, just a statement of fact.
Harry has no idea what's up therefore we have no idea what's up. The fact that I don't solidly understand her past isn't helping me to understand all the differences in her current universe.
The list helped a bit though. I think I'm gonna go muddle through chapter one a few times and see if that helps. I struggled to understand that one a lot. I think it was a lot of the formatting, but idk. Tbh I hate those floaty "what is going on?!" stories that last forever to figure out. I'd much rather she just say she has no idea what the he'll is happening and tells her story, and then the potters tell theirs. Because I'm lazy. This is not good advice don't listen to me.
I'm looking forward to seeing more!
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So are we not going to see her in SPN world? Or is all this an illusion from Gabriel whist they are trying to heal her?

Very interesting :D So a glimpse into Hadrea's past, and what an interesting past it is

That... Surprisingly makes a lot of sense.
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I really like the concept but I'm a bit confused with the whole introduction theme. Is this post-DH crossover Supernatural going to AU? Also, how did Harry and the Supernatural gang meet and what happened with the whole war thing from Harry's original time? How come death is tied with Lucifer for a moment? And other Gods? I'm not too far in Supernatural yet but is Loki part of it or is this another crossover with something? A little back story would help. Anyways keep up the good work! I'm really liking it so far and I'm interested to see where your going with this. Best Wishes!

... So is this an au from the future in the past of another universe/timeline to change things as they've been changed ooorrr?
Cuz Voldemort said something about a brother so in assuming the boy who lived thing is seperate from her in this universe, but maybe not her own.. Also the lack of death in regards to her parents as there's a nice bedroom for her...
I'm a bit confused on her backstory, but all in due time I suppose!
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So, she's already hung out with the SPN gang and was killed? How old is she? Has Gabriel just sent her to an AU? Slightly *read : very* confused, but looking forward to seeing where you take this :)

Very intriguing!