| Reviews for The Fall |
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powerrangersoflight chapter 13 . 1/10 Please update soon! |
Jerzu chapter 13 . 10/7/2019 Can I just say, I love this story? Like damn, It’s been awhile since I’ve read a story that makes me feel genuinely entertained. While I think Raven’s snappish character at the beginning may have been a little off, the way her relationship with Apache progressed was great. Though I think she didn’t display enough reluctance when it came to disclosing the information on how to beat Trigon. Just saying anything in particular is bad enough. Disclosing the entire event? That’s a disaster. Telling Robin that he’s gonna team up with Slade to save Raven in the future will probably piss him off, but you can avoid having to explain the entire event that way. Kinda wish you did something like that instead of unveiling the future. Damn you Beastboy for bringing the subject up. The world is doomed now. By the way? I very much wish that Apache gains the ability to morph between human and dog freely. She just feels more useless now that she’s human. She could just randomly figure out she can, or she can develop a metagene that allows her to change between forms. Or you can come up with a whole new idea. Or don’t, if you have plans for her to stay human. If it clashes with your original idea, you can just ignore me. One of the struggles as a writer is dealing with your reader’s opinion, so you probably shouldn’t let my words sway you. |
Nampayo chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 It's a good story, very creative. I'm looking forward to seeing how the demon ties into Apache. Please complete this story! |
xbox432 chapter 13 . 6/30/2019 I hope you know that I've binged this to the point it is now... 5:24 a.m. I am tired. Damn good story though. Thank you for the glorious entertainment. Now I just have to hope you continue updating, I really can't wait to see how you have Apache approach Jinx. Especially how she'll get by Jinx's paranoia. Also, I'm loving the characterization of the Titans. Starfire in particular, just like when I was watching the show, I just can't help but smile when she has lines. |
Circle Girl chapter 13 . 6/22/2019 I'd honestly love if you could manage the polyamory, even if it's not a true triad (though that *would* be amazing, haha!). It's so hard to find good femslash poly fics, much less in this fandom with the characters you have, and I do think you'd be able to do it justice. Good luck and looking forward to the next chapter! |
Hold777 chapter 7 . 6/22/2019 i thought robin was supposed to be smart, she already proofed that she knows things, and he is not that concerned that the enemy has someone that knows so much. |
Mestophilies chapter 13 . 6/21/2019 Huzzah! An update! Happy to see you back, and eager to read more 3 |
bellice2hot chapter 13 . 6/21/2019 I'm just glad your updating. I have loved this story since I started reading it a good while now, keep up the good work and I wait for the next one. :) |
Magnaton.sver chapter 13 . 6/21/2019 YES! |
Quiet Kitsune chapter 13 . 6/21/2019 .I am so excited that this is back it's definitely a pleasant surprise. I am hyped up all over again. |
LoneLeon chapter 12 . 3/13/2019 Please update I'm a new fan of this book. And question do you still have a idea of the next chapter or is it already written just not posted yet? And do you think you will be updating this story in the near future? But anyways sorry for all the questions and amazing, well done chapter. _ |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/13/2019 Good story. Liked it. |
NightshadeLG chapter 12 . 8/23/2018 Yes it is. It is the beginning of the end. Thats what its called, after all. Anyways, love the story, hope for more. |
TacoKing23 chapter 12 . 4/7/2017 Alright, you got me. Self-insert or not, this one is a lot of fun to read. |
TacoKing23 chapter 1 . 4/7/2017 This seems like a very unusual self-insert fic, which I normally abhor. This one is very interesting though, so I will give it a shot. |