just re-read what you had, I still enjoy the story so I am curious if you get another spree out, has been a while

Well I finished what has been written so far. While I really enjoyed the hell out of it, it has also exhausted me. You brought Sylvanas' flip-floppiness under controller which helped immensely, by whew it still feels like I had a 12 hour shift without a break! You almost never give a reprieve from bad happenings and setbacks. I feel like the angst tag would be very appropriate. I was a bit disappointed by how predictable some of the parts were though. Alyna's recapture being the main offender.

Looking forward to more.

I really enjoy this, but it aggravates me how flip-floppy you have made Sylvanas.

I liked the Sylvanas-Liadrin interaction/encounter. And also Liadrin's tactical decisions. And we see how much Sylvanas truly values Alyna - even above her wish for revenge upon Arthas.

It was interesting that her captors didn't do stuff to Alyna immediately. And it was nice to get a peek at Alyna's old rooms. As well as Alyna's thoughts about Sylvanas. I'm curious as to what the ritual will actually do.

Thank you for the update.

Ohh, so Alyna is on her way to become Blood Queen... since there is a new and improved ritual.

I think it would be fitting if Alyna would jump off Icecrown because Alyna has the most struggle and trauma. Sylvanas kinda is in a good spot, since Alyna brought her emotions and gave her her love back. Alyna generally bringst the best out of her, so it would be fitting if Alyna is trying to kill herself. :)

I think... Alyna should be actually a bit angry at Sylvanas... I mean, Sylvanas was draggind Alyna into the living room of the lich king without much of a plan and Sylvanas kinda ignored Alynas feelings and doubts towards this. Now in Alyna's Point-of-View she suffersm while Sylvanas is sitting at home.

I am enjoying reading this, like always, very addictive to read!

I am soooo much looking forward to the next chapter! :3

And like always... sorry for my bad grammar! :3

During the chapter, I was like... hmmm there will surely something happen to Alyna right? I kinda thought that Alyna will shortly grab Frostmoure... I think it was pretty foolish story-wise to go into the living room of the lich king... I mean, how would they take Frostmoure, since they can't touch it?

In this story they lost champions and Alyna because of nothing, they essentially only gave the lich king more soldiers.

This chapter was very exciting and we got a intense SilvanasXAlyna moment! :3

Alyna beat Sandoval pretty quickly, I like how this kinda shows Alynas expérience and tactics in combat. :)

I've already read until chapter 39, but I forgot to comment. :3

also Alyna is gonna do a big gamer moment I can tell

and so the power creep goes forward I look forward to seeing just what this transformation will do

LMAO! That end author note was great! Your poor poor friend!

So what’s the backstory behind this pally? Is he from Gilneas? Is he from Lordaeron? Somewhere else?

Loved the story, but I’m confused on why Alyna smirked when they basically told her “yea, btw, we will be speeding up the process of your brainwashing! Step into the Ultimate Pool Of Weird Destiny Changing Liquids!”

I only know some details of the Icecrown Citadel's instances from wikis, so most of the events in this chapter is new to me.

I like the part where Dark Ranger Vorel low-key reminded Alyna before she entered the room. And I really liked the part about the surprise visitor & the dynamics of their conversation, the three of them. And the three of them working together in the battle.

The last part of this chapter was sad but I understand that it needed to be this way. Thank you for the update.

Its really weird seeing an optimistic Jania after such a long time of current Jania.

Would the Scourgelord even have a soul to drain? I thought that the undead were souless hense why Alyana couldnt just drain the undead before fighting Arthas? And I guess the extension of that is could she have drained Rimefang?

Ill personally never forget the first time I saw Uther come out as a soul, love the man. Always disliked how much Jaina wanted to try and eedeem Arthas, its understandable but I mean the man killed millions.

I see that Arthas's foreshadowing became reality. I knew Alyana would change sides to save Sylvanas! Now the real question is what will Arthas make her do? Maybe become embrace her original role as a queen? Kill some friends? Torture her? All the possibilities!

Wonderful work!

well Lana'thel you might be getting replaced as a boss in ICC and Sylvnas is gonna rage against the machine a lot

Dude. You are about to bring a shit ton of anger back on you for this chapter lol. Good job nonetheless

I continue to appreciate their mutually supportive relationship. And Alyna's confidence. I also like the clever strategy utilized in the duel, and especially the use of the bladed bow. Thank you for the update.