Oof

I totally think you should add another chapter to this beautiful story.

I TEARED UP A STORM YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER!

Wow, how sad! How incredibly gloomy of a fic! And the sad thing is that I love it! It shows just how deep their friendship and love could've been/become had certain things not happened. I hope you can write more NaLi stories, because there's tragic few of them here (when compared to NaLu). Great work, if really saddening.

The angst is real. ;-; Poor Natsu, having visions of Lisanna like that.

But I absolutely LOVED this! Your writing style is beautiful, and the way you captured his his emotions as he realizes the meaning behind Lisanna's voice is so beautiful! I definently applaud you for this!

you confusing jack ass nice one good plot twist

Im not NaLi but i gave it a shot.
Man you a harsh. Its enrapturing so as muchas i hate to say it, keep going.
If i could cry less that would be nice too