Please update! I love this story!

I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY PLEASE! When's the next chapter coming up ?

Damn, this is an excellent fanfic. Please continue, don't stop!

BLUE EYES AND CORNELIA AND CEASAR ARE DEAD

The new movies already out

Caesar, Cornelia and Blue eye's dies in the movie Out of Caesar's family Cornelius (Milo) survives and is now being watched by the tribe, Blue eye's mate and Maurice.

Unnecessary conflict with Koba and Nina. Koba has been through things and I'm sure chimps were killed before the rebellion. Non has no right to judge him and it's seriously pissing me off how your just adding conflict that doesn't even need to be there.

There was absolutely no reason for them to lie. What they did was self defense, and Caesar wouldn't even be the least bit pissed with them killing someone. They lied, now they aren't trustworthy and it will surely come back to bite them in the ass.

Tampons are way better

I love your story and started reading it. I just couldn't stop and finished what was up in one sitting. It's amazing and I would really like more. I always love a happy ending and wish for a next chapter. Best wishes -

Please update soon as possible please please

So not only did we miss something we haven't really seen in the movies that would have been fun to read about, Koba just got his horse killed only to find that the apes he was searching for got back fine enough without him.

Jules, there's a lesson in storytelling that I funk might serve you well: Show, don't tell.

"Hey, why you so hyped?"

T_T Did a hyper advanced ape really just say the word "hyped?"

Also, where the Hell did this conflict with Grey come from? To quote YOU, didn't you breifly mentioned he was starting to like her? Again, which is it?

First, why was there a dash in between the story Koba was telling? He was explaining it himself, so I assume it wasn't a flashback. It feels kind of pointless.

And second,
"And so the father forbade his son from taking Nina as his mate."

Yeaah, I may nitpick about some things, but this is the first time I'm legit irritated about something written so far out of character. Caesar wouldn't condemn that kind of relationship, even for the sake of his bloodline. He'd be worried for his son's happiness, but not to that extent. This seems like you're just adding suspense and drama purely for the sake of it.

Kind of good aim Nina has with a bow... and by good, I mean "kind of borders on impossible." Also, where'd she learn how to shoot? And would she have had access to a Netflix account to even know what Bojack is?