| Reviews for Unsteady |
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Anis Miarie chapter 6 . 1/1/2017 i read hints of rush hour here |
NikkiS71 chapter 7 . 6/16/2016 Damn! That was a lot! Goodness knows it's good to see Wolfram talking about his experiences with that damn foster family of his. Those filthy asswipes! Thank goodness he had Yuuri to show him what true love was like. Also, I'm glad that he was able to talk to Yozak. The more he talks about what happened, the more he heals. And, realizes just how closed off to his brothers and everyone he's been. And how he realized that there was really nothing that Conrart nor Gwendal could have done back then. They really tried to protect him. Great job on this! BTW... Thanks for putting the emphasis on the differences of a rape victim and a rape SURVIVOR! I bow to you for that! B reading U! |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2016 Could be Yosak? Oh my please write soon the suspense is killing me now... |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2016 It might be Günter... Coming in and saying that since they consummated their engagement they now have to get married within a year. Or one of Wolf's brothers. |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/8/2016 I dont know what to said but i really really like your story OMG! Sorry i cant say much. Everyday i saw you update i want to review you but i didnt know what should i write All that i can said is how i really like your story All you story. |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/5/2016 The chapter was so touching and makes me feels really emotional for wolfram. This is really great it's well written you nailed it again! |
NikkiS71 chapter 5 . 6/5/2016 Another solid and awesome chapter. I truly enjoy your work! B reading U! |
Scarlet Fire Burns chapter 4 . 6/4/2016 Holy Shit. I actually like this fic. I love how Wolfram is quirky but not too OOC. It's cool that you gave Wolfram a home with lesbian parent so you wouldn't have a Wolfram being homophobia. Too many new characters for me, if you are going to create them, make-up semi-good to good backstories for them (this is funny coming from me). I like that Wolfram semi/kind of talks to the audience, and that it's usually a joke that's funny, just DON'T over do it. So far, I like what I read so keep up the good work! ~Scarlet |
Alli chapter 5 . 6/4/2016 Great chapter! (And i think that 'what if Conrart and Gwendal didn't interupt' side story would be a great idia, i really like your yuuram smut) And i admit I also have made a Yuuri and Wolfram in the sims 4 although I have not actually played the game with them yet because i feel that i am not capable of proporly portaying the beauty of Wolfram so i feel wrong playing with them XD do you have your sims on the gallary? Because if so i would love to download them! |
NikkiS71 chapter 4 . 6/3/2016 Wolfram's flashbacks are really intense. But, they uncover so much. Now, Yuuri's in for some trouble. LOL... B reading U! |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2016 Great chapter! So far in every chapter of this story your have managed to have at least one comment that is just absolutely halarious! Exited to se how that convordation with grandma will go in the next chapter! As for making Conrart Wolfram's twin i dont realy think that is a very good idia, their age difference is pretty needed for this plot otherwise he would be in the same grade as Wolfram an everything and i just in general think that it is just very un-needed to make them twins. |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/2/2016 Update please |
NikkiS71 chapter 3 . 5/31/2016 Never apologize! Your writing skills show in the detail that you put into your chapters. Keep transporting me into the world YOU gave them! B reading U! |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/30/2016 The twist and plot of the story is brilliant! Another brilliant story to read and follow! |
NikkiS71 chapter 2 . 5/30/2016 Well, I like your work. Also, I happen to love Tim Burton movies, he's really twisted! Nightmare before Christmas is one of my all time favorites! I sing along with Oogie Boogie every time! B reading U! |