Interesting

well I do like it, should I bother to add to my favorite list is another story. began in May 28, 2016, just updated in Oct 10, 2018. Word total 10,927. I does not really give hope for this story, even if its well made. To tell the truth my page on this site contains so many uncomplete stories, most abandoned for various reasons, school, work and even death of the said author. And some are complete, to tell the truth for one I loved so much I waited roughly 10 years for its completion. Yet... I wish to see it continue and gain a bit of filling and maybe a possible completion, but so little work over two years does not leave me with great hope. Well I will leave this, and maybe if I do come across on search the story I will read it once more, and hopefully these changes will improve in terms of story length.

Seems really interesting! Well written, hope to see more!

I'm loving this Harry.

Love it so far can’t wait to see where your story leads!

Lovely

When the person talking changes you need to start a new paragraph, even if the talking is in his head.

A great story here so far!

Thanks for the chapter!

good fic

i cant wait to see the next chapter

Are we still on the jet or are we on the helicarrier in confused where's furry come from.

And another chapter of just well written story telling. It still captures my attention and holds it captive for the duration of your latest chapter. As always, I find myself eagerly awaiting your next chapter, and I truly appreciate you sharing your vision.

Thank You!

Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of Harry Potter stories, and most have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!