| Reviews for 500 Years of Penance |
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Guest chapter 55 . 7/21 Hello! So glad you are back doing this story, and can’t wait to see what more you have in store! |
District-9-Winters chapter 1 . 7/16 Really? 500 whoooooole years? That's a looooong time but I can't wait tooooooo read them all! Great introoooooo |
Sparky She-Demon chapter 59 . 7/12 Loved how you did Blight's games! |
Reigon chapter 29 . 6/27 A Fun story, but one big Problem: your bloodbaths get unrealistic and predictable. To trap the other tributes the others must be faster, but non of them thought about grabing a weapon and killing at least one Career before he or she can grab one. And every single one of your Careers manage to kill multiple people without a single wound in short range combat, shot two running targets in quickly one after the other and other superhuman feats, that most people need a lifetime to match. Throw a Green Beret into the bloodbath and he would most likely be killed by a casualy thrown knife or a lazy backhand swing by one of your Careers. |
MRKenn chapter 58 . 6/23 Well it’s the infamous Titus games, and I can say my stomach is still in a knot reading about him slurping up intestines. My mouth dropped when I read Titus’ name in the intro. I was like “ohhh no”. I liked these tributes a lot, and the Career pack fight was surprsing since something like that rarely happens so far from the end. Snow’s a pansy for starving the kids in the arena though, and as a result he created a crazy cannibal that tarnished the reputation of the Games and Capitol! Of course it doesn’t matter in the end lol. I really like Lucullus and his ‘dirks’, he stood out to me early and I was hoping he’d win! Well to be honest I was hoping it was anyone but Titus, lmao. I’m surprised that these Games were anything more than Titus feasting on someone’s guts for dinner and everyone else starving to death considering Snow was still butthurt about people not liking him xD. Nonetheless they were great! Good job! |
Guest chapter 58 . 6/22 Titus died because of an avalanche, not because of a career |
Sparky She-Demon chapter 58 . 6/22 A studious Career? That's new. Like him though! |
Osiris chapter 57 . 6/8 I thought Chaise was the villain and I was not a fan of him. I was rooting for Delta and Virnea. But I guess the good guys cannot always win. Just wish Chaise was more likable but it is no big deal. I hope that we get to see Blight and Cecelia soon. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5 will you have a plant? and will the plant be avictor |
Sparky She-Demon chapter 57 . 6/4 Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Initially thought that it was going to be a Titanic arena. |
Sparky She-Demon chapter 56 . 5/30 Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next! Like Brandy! |
AlexFalTon chapter 56 . 5/29 Bling is a funny name for... Well, anyone. |
Sparky She-Demon chapter 55 . 5/28 Nice to see you again! Loved the chapter, was rooting for Tex actually! |
beauthg03 chapter 55 . 5/27 Great news, I'm still obsessed with this. I'm glad that you found time to give an update! I really enjoyed the arena and I liked the volcano and jungle aspects. I was rooting for either Tex or Stacy to win in the end so I'm happy Tex won. Thanks for this wonderful surprise haha |
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 7/26/2019 this sounds incredible |