Now I know you're not be planning to try and sink the RENORA battleship because everyone knows if someone we're to do that Then the loyal fandom members would hit Say person Like A bullet train to jello. ‚’-)

When is this going to be updated again? Good work on it.

I Vote Blake
also, please update

yang could call him ki, I got that from SAO abridged

You forgot to mention that Kirito wears a fidget spinner...

Has a lot of potential, needs more chapters.

YOU FOOLS! YOU'VE KILLED US ALL! How dare Leafa come in second. INCEST IS NOT THE BEST! I'm not scared of spiders harming me, i'm scared of them walking over me. Transversely, I don't care if she's not blood related, i just dont wanna hear. 'That feels good , LOOK WHAT YOU DID

Love the story! I hope for more.

More please

I really liked how this was going and the fact that only a few from sao came with, even if I don't know then well. I do wish this to not die and to continue on. Btw will kirito ever change his outfit or weapons? I'd think it would be cool for kirito to get new weapons to help in the new world of remnant after he realizes he needs upgrades or something bad happens (like dark repulser breaking). Just a thought I want to throw out to you. Keep up with the good work!

Since people are voting for four people add Winter and Neo to my count good Sir/Madam.
(Also sorry about this one being on 6.I can only post one review a chapter.)

I kinda wanna cast two for Penny considering she SOMEHOW isn't even on the board,and the other for Pyrrha.
Also for like an Omake I just think it would be amusing to see Jaune reacting to his sisters having crushes on Kirito or something like that.

The premise isn't bad, but putting aside how Kirito and the gang ended up in Remnant in the first place - the transition and pace is too fast and abrupt, making the story rather... boring to read.

For example, you should have shown the conversation that Kirito had with Blake when they ran into each other at Beacon.

Second, it felt kind of abrupt when Kirito easily accepted Ozpin's offer to Beacon.

In other words, this story requires more exposition about the turn-out of events.

Good story, I want to see the next part.

What I've seen of this story thus far is really good. Good character interaction, not lacking in emotion or humor. One thing to watch for in making this a harem; every character needs to fall for Kirito in one way or another. To many harem fics (Or ship fics in general) just mash the characters together and expect the audience to just accept it. Avoid that. Secondly, while your fight scenes are good, the fact that you give the attack names in bold is a good choice, but leaving the attack itself out and having it explained at the end isn't. Assume that the audience doesn't know what the attack is, a give a quick, watered down "real time" description of the attack. That will make the fight scenes flow a bit more smoothly. Other than that, keep up the good work!