Reviews for How I Failed To Avoid The Plot
Archer0 chapter 19 . 23h
Chris the unreliable narrator hurrah!
Guest chapter 27 . 7/25
The number of the chapter should be 26.5 not 265. Either that or I'm being dumb.
Someguy the anon chapter 27 . 7/21
the yandere is the dog girl isnt it?
eseer chapter 26 . 7/15
yeah, if he finished the thuum, it actually would bend reality.
the full word of power is "talk with lucifer".
eseer chapter 25 . 7/14
at this point chris mcclean's life is basically that reaction meme of lisa becoming dead inside
eseer chapter 18 . 7/14
bum janitor: *Sees neo*
bum janitor: GET THIS DAMN THING OF MY NECK-
eseer chapter 17 . 7/3
hazel: no, but-
chris: KILLER QUEEN HAS ALREADY TOUCHED THIS FLOOR!
eseer chapter 7 . 7/3
dude, why not option 3: hold up a finger, scarf down the sanvich, THEN speak.
eseer chapter 3 . 7/3
also, pathetic. staring dead-on, i bet i could best the puppy eyes. just gotta have a distraction, be it physical or mental.
eseer chapter 2 . 7/3
granny badass: CALL AN AMBULANCE, CALL AN AMBULANCE!

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FuruMega chapter 27 . 7/2
Wowie-Mawee.

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this is a wonderful chapter as is other the other chapters before this as well, because again, .

I a for the next chapter man.

it's gonna be greatttttttttttttt!
Masquer Q chapter 27 . 7/1
Loving it!
The writing is hilarious yet can be serious when it needs to be.
Soupreme chapter 15 . 6/17
Man, I just recently read this fanfic of yours and it's so funny and I like how you orchestrated the interactions between the characters and I'm grateful for the sheer comedy relief that is Chris. Thanks for the chapter!
Guest chapter 25 . 6/11
I want to start off with praise. I like the whimsical-ish approach to Chris. It feels like a great breath of fresh air compared to the usually homogenous SI/OC personalities we see. I love that his actions are flawed and cowardly. It takes a certain measure to give your characters large flaws and actually respect them when the time for mistakes comes.

Decent pacing and great humor.

What motivated me to review what when I read that Sun read Chris' medical records. I know it's 2 chapters late, but I just need to impart the severity of such a breach in patient privacy. Not that it really matters story-wise, but beaches like that are huge irl. Doctors get fired, nurses get sacked, and if it's a large case administrative structures are broken and rebuilt. I used to volunteer at a hospital and another volunteer accidently left patient information in full view and it got stolen. You will not believe the absolute hell that was raised. They nearly dissolved the whole volunteer program then and there.

Anyways, sorry for the rant. HIPAA is a really big deal.

Keep up the good work and thank you for spending the time to share your creativity with us. Stay safe and healthy out there
GEStorm chapter 27 . 6/4
So it's already decided that Cinder is a REAL good guy in this story? Am I the only one who apparently still doubting her regarding Chris
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