Hi just read your story it was good

Very rushed but interesting story.

Hi that was a good story.

It was interesting, ill give you that..! But it seems rushed in some place..
Like harry and hermione meet at the zoo then left came back harry told his family he was going but what happened to hermione's..?!

What happened to her parents...?!

Then there was a very short bit about how they got together but then nothing.. it was mostly about harry and what he was doing..!

Why involve the weasleys at all and if you had to why not at the first sign of trouble boot them back to were they came from wipe the memories of what they're seen etc... because that wasn't fair to hermione..!

If you write more, (which I hope you do..) how would introduce the air force angle with jack, sam, and daniel.. because in what you have written harry has taken care of everyone..

Anyway I hope you write more...

An interesting story pretty good so far is there a sequel

You said they allowed Sirius Black to meet them and then he was never mentioned again. You forgot Hermione for most of the story. It was Harry did this and that. SO to me this story was too rushed and all over the place.

Quite the fun story. I do wish it had been spread out a bit more, but it's shorter length and fast pacing allowed me to enjoy the entire thing in one sitting before work, so it had it's benefits too. Wish there were more of these types of fics. Love the Alteran Legacy style of crossover.

Two of my favorites, Harry Potter and SG-1. Put them together and it has to be my favorite story. Thank you greatly for writing!

Are you working on anything else? If so, please, PLEASE, post it soon. As Oliver asked, "Please sir, may I have some more?"

Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.

this is not a story really, but a report about what happened.

The ending feels kind of dunno, missing something.

Anyways, good story (:

Colorado not Montana or did he buy another property.

Fun story, though I noticed that no mention was made of Hermione's family at any point.

A very interesting one-shot story.

awesome story