Wish you'd update.

LOVE IT!

I forgot to write this in my review, but I loved how you snuck in one of the infamous Doctor Who lines, I wish that Charles had been there when Erik said that & said "Oh. Oh yeah? Oh, you never do.", would've been so freaking awesome & hilarious! I can totally picture them arguing like that...Is Erik going to separated from Nina & the rest of them when they wake up in Stryker's, for lack of better word(s), holding cell? Cause I wouldn't put it past him to just cart a fugitive, despite changing off to prison &/or torture them...also, considering the base, especially the holding cell has a shit ton of metal, Stryker would separate them anyway cause Erik wouldn't just stand by & allow him & his little girl to be caged like that, at least for too long...please update or write a sequel soon, please, please, pleeeeeeease!

love it! when Magda & Nina were killed & Erik broke down it broke my heart...he was starting over, he was turning over a new leaf, he wasn't the extremist activist that didn't bat an eye when killing someone (though to be fair, most of those were Shaw & ex-Nazis who tortured him, his family & his people) anymore. He was just a man, a man who he probably would've been if he hadn't been in the middle of WWII, if he hadn't been a victim of the Holocaust...I loved it when they showed what became of his life, he found someone (a human at that-real progress there) he fell in love with her, they got married & had a child...it showed that he was a good man, a good husband & especially a good father...love when he sings to Nina, he had a sweet, gentle side, it showed he wasn't a monster, nor was he ever really a monster to begin with, he just had trouble seeing good in things (especially people) because he's already seen the worst in them...Holding Magda & Nina in his arms & when he said "not my babies", it just made me wanna hold him as well as when he goes to where he worked & the look on his face, broke my heart even more, that was the face of a broken man, a man who had nothing left to live for, & you wanna cry, but you don't have any more tears left to shed...but I like how in this, you still let him have Nina, he still had his little girl...please update or write a sequel because this is too good to let die...worries me a little what Stryker's gonna do with Erik & Nina...& what about Charles, will Erik try to save him along with the others?...is Charles gonna be Nina's "step-mommy" somewhere down the line? That'd be an interesting idea...

Should i lose all hope youre gonna continue this story? It is super great btw

Ahhhh! This is so good! Will you continue?

please update

update please

Please update

Oh my gosh I love this, and this cliffie is killing me! Awesome job on this!

Great story ! It's really well written and I think you really managed to capture the way each character behaves and talks. Can't wait for the next chapter

Please update. I love the possible Quicksilver/Magneto relationship on x men and it'd be interesting to know how Nina will play in it.

OMG. I love your story ! )

Like you I very enjoyed Xmen Apocalypse, but I was soooooo sad for Erik. So I'm happy to read a story with Nina alive.

And I can't wait for the next chapter:
how Peter will react to his first "official" meeting with his father and his little sister ?
Magneto will kill Striker (and everyone who can be dangerous for his precious daughter) ?
Nina will go to the battlefield with the team ?

I think you can see (read) how I loved this four chapters, and my impatience pour the next one !

Sincerly,
Mirty

PS: I'm sorry if I wrote some mistakes, I'm French and my English is not very good But for you fanfiction the language doesn't matter, I can make an effort to read and to write in English D

Please post another chapter? Pretty please?

FAN!~