So far better than the original

I won’t accuse you of stealing just yet but I cannot help but feel as though I read this before this does not feel new to me. I hope that I am wrong or that it gets cleared up shortly.

Ah dammit, this was waaay better than your og red x, you got better as a writer though there were a lit of view changes

Warbender's outer office had a nice feel as the author waited for the review. Strange sounds emanated from the office door as a deep almost evil sounding voice is heard. " HA! Oh My YES! That NEVER gets old. He he he he… Oh look at the time. I guess 379 kills for the round will have to do." Soon an older man with a confidence not encountered in a while pokes his head out of the door. "Oh you are here. Well come on in, and have a seat." The man's voice with a deep silky tone that would make Darth Vader jealous. As you enter the computer on the desk showing a rankings page of a game. "Oh that's one of my things. I have literally been gaming. More specifically war gaming dince the invention of a game called pong. I am currently the #2 ranked player in the world at as well as being a chef, and a very avid reader." His smooth as silk tones setting you at ease as he gave a genuine smile."Let's get started shall we? First off. I like how this flows as I read it. I had some issue with how the storyling split several times, but you seem to have tied everything neatly together. There is little if any background descriptions to help flesh out the picture of what is going on within your story, and this will make a lot of people not gat as comp. a picture as you may like. Though the balance of you foreground action/diologue, and background goings on (I.E. The early summer morning air moving with a gentle caress along the skin as the team met on the training field. (Enter basic story start to chapter scene here)) The little bits of add on will "Flesh out" What you want the reader to picture as they are reading. Even with this. You have managed to write an engaging story. Well done so far. I look forward to reading more. For now. It is time you left. I need to go blow up opponents in the free for all arena in . Take care now, and may the words of your story flow well, and easy."

The fight was a bit off. He kept taking hits not paying attention repeatedly. Best example being caught off guard and hit by a a loud charging bull.

Also having those birdarangs tossed at him by Robin who was right in front of him and blocking them. Yet not seeing Robin run a curve around and kick him in the side. Which also means he out ran his birdarangs that only made it half way over btw.

That part in the beginning was DMC3 wasn't it? xD I've always loved that scene.

why not a harem?

Absolutely loved it, loved the original too, sad that this hasn't been updated in over a year, its an amazing fic. Please update soon!

dear writer please make more chapters

It safe to say that this story is dead. One year since last update. It was amazing while it lasted :(

Amazing story
Sad this story been dead for almost a year now

I think I get it about the hole Deula dug and the fact it's a treasure hunt. X marks the spot. Lol

Well that was fun I enjoyed this looking forward to more. Btw will there be lemons? I'm kinda hoping you do write some they add a lot to the waight of a pairing. But I can't really figure out who he's going to end up with a lot of charecters are giving of singles twords him. I'm almost sure he's getting a Heram with how many flags you're rising.

Ok I actually have a interesting question would you consider a spin off of this were Starfire winds up in the injustice timeline. It's a little known fact that the titens were in the injustice orgin comic and Starfire and cyborg are definitely in injustice Robin being killed by Damian Wayne beast boy is most likely dead in injustice no offense but the doom potrol is kinda suacideal. I mean they are more so then the suacide Squad. But honestly I think red x would be a interesting part of injustice seeing how he could side with nither faction I think him some antiheros and villens would wind up as a third faction for the people. He'd also probably be the only person who could help star fire given the hero/villen war would complacate things. I just don't see how Starfires disaperince would course injustice though. I mean maybe naruto never gose to Gotham and joker winds up getting bord so he decides to start that whole chain of events but how would Starfire fit into that unless you send Raven instead of Starfire I mean Raven is the equalizer of the titens star is the heart and Robin is the brain without Raven they would descend into Anarchy.

Ok thanks for just letting get that idea out of my head it was kinda nagging at the back of my skull Trying to figure out how it would happen if someone decided to try the concept I had to brainstorm it was uncontrollable.

Bruh plz make the pairing naruto x starfire and no harem...im tired of it