oh come on this can't be it. there's got to be more to this.

This story is fantastic! Vegeta seems to be completely in character and I love his interactions with Bulma and his relationship with her mother. Keep up the great work!

uh...grammar is a put off :(

Oh no! Vegeta you better get your ass in gear if you want Bulma for yourself. Is Yamcha gonna be a cheating prick in this story? I don't think Bunny likes Yamcha too much. Update again soon

I think your idea is good, but your formatting needs some work. You also change to present tense a few times, and just have small errors here and there.
I really like the story so far and hope it stays funny. Can't wait for more.