Pls keep updating! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Storybird

Update? Pleaseeeee.

Great story! Please update!

Loved this! Seriously. I've said this about 9 million times but honestly you write their chemistry and partnership soooooo well, it's insane. I like the way their relationship is developing, and I also really enjoy being totally in Nat's head. I'm struggling to express how I feel about this story so far, I just really love it! This is my favourite ongoing story, can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm crying I need longer chapters. This gets better with each paragraph honestly. I cannot wait for the next update!

Very nicely done Weepingangelofnewnewyork! I really want to see more.

Storybird

Wow please let nat be okay.

I'm getting so anxious for the next chapter because this was so good. I swear if Natasha is poisoned or something...

THIS IS SO GOOD I'M CRYING I NEED MORE PLEASE THANK YOU

How do you write their characters and chemistry so well?! Your writing pulls me in instantly and I feel like I can instantly picture the characters doing what they're doing, as crazy as that may sound! Even the summary was enough to get me excited. Great opening chapter and I'm really really looking forward to reading the rest of this!

I enjoy how you've written the interactions between these two! The opening line was a very effective hook-I was pulled into the story right away, and you kept excellent pacing throughout the chapter! However, I'm a little confused about the timeline for this and what their relationship is right now. They don't seem to be actually together because Natasha is hesitating and going back to her own room. But where are they? Do they live in a house together? Are they at SHIELD? Are they on a mission? I know that this is from Natasha's perspective, and she won't know what Clint is dreaming about, but do you think she would have any ideas? Did they just come from a mission that might have triggered memories for both of them? Does he still have nightmares about Loki? Maybe hinting at details like that will provide the reader with more clarity about the context for the events that are going to take place in the story. Obviously, these are just suggestions, and this is your story, so please feel free to ignore or disregard any of these ideas. I think this story is off to a great start!
I look forward to reading more!