| Reviews for Justice League Vs The Beast |
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ThommyPickles chapter 55 . 7/13 I've finally caught up after 4 years with this story. If it took me that long to catch up, then I have no qualms with waiting for the next update. This has been a ride and a half and I can't wait to see it all wrap up. |
nw150 chapter 1 . 6/28 PLEASE DON'T FORGET ABOUT THIS STORY! |
Whoelsebutme11 chapter 55 . 6/7 Ah this is so good! I’ve binged the whole story over the past 2 weeks and have fallen in love with everything about it. Keep up the fantastic work, I cannot wait to see where you take them all next and what perils and triumphs the two of them experience! |
RedFalconWriter chapter 47 . 6/6 Okay, I'll start by saying that I've enjoyed this story a lot so far, and I look forward to reading more of it. That said, this chapter, and the end of the last one, completely shatter any form of believability. Beast Boy is not stupid. A bit immature at times, but not a complete and utter F***ing moron. He knows there's a time and a place to deal with emotional stuff, and being hunted by a nearby Superman is NOT that time or place. Heck, I'm shocked that Raven wasn't smart enough to drag Gar through the teleport tube, destroy it to cover their tracks, and only then actually work on healing him, since he clearly wasn't about to die if she didn't start healing him right then and there. Sending Supes a few miles (at most) away would only buy them seconds, at BEST, and she'd know that. Secondly, I have no problem with White Raven taking on Superman and holding her own, since she managed to banish Trigon, who is arguably a tier or more above even the likes of Darkseid, but Beast Boy taking on Superman and lasting more than a split second? Patently ABSURD. Even with all the strength and versatility of the animal kingdom powered up on whatever buff the Beast provides, BB doesn't stand a snowflake's chance in hell of putting so much as a microscopic paper cut on the Man of Steel. (Unless his buff is somehow magical in nature, which you didn't seem to indicate in the chapter) Superman is a guy that can tank the power of multiple supernovas to the face and just shrug it off! BB, even with very powerful buffs that allow him to go supersonic and the like as described in this chapter, is still several orders of magnitude outclassed by Superman on casual mode. This chapter is roughly equivalent to you saying, "Oh, yeah, just some random guy just took on One Punch Man and won, despite not performing feats anything close to what we've seen One Punch Man perform casually many times over." It's patently and totally absurd and completely immersion shattering. To be frank, this whole sequence feels very, very contrived, and like just an excuse to allow Beast Boy to have an impossibly badass moment that allows him to somehow take down a guy that, even with your buffs to BB, is literally at LEAST tens of thousands of times stronger than him. Even though it's roughly equivalent to T-rex somehow taking out the Death Star. Alright, with that rant off my chest, on to the next chapter! Yay! |
nw150 chapter 55 . 5/23 please don't forget this! |
Ziad.gaber.jr chapter 55 . 5/16 just remembering the days where you used to update every friday. good old times anyways,I am kidding just don't forget that you left us on a cliffhanger |
Eris chapter 55 . 5/5 Awesome chapter. Shocking cliffhanger. |
Tythos chapter 55 . 4/5 Great story. Really like it. I just got a account, but have been following this story for quite some time. It is one of the stories that got me into fan fiction in the first place. Keep it up. A big part of me want to see Raven throw Zatanna off the Watch Tower, and when she burns to a crisp on the way down, her magic dissolves, freeing the other heroes from her influence, saving BB and Rae. It would be satisfying, but also a little cheap I guess. |
Dinosaur Fan 11 chapter 20 . 3/19 Please excuse me if this may seem lengthy, but I couldn't help but wanting to write a review now rather than wait until catching up. I got into reading Teen Titans fanfic throughout this past year and recently got into it again along with reading your story a few days ago and I am now hooked and have been trying to read almost through the enitre day, from breaks at work to at home and staying awake later to read before going to sleep for the night! I wish I had found this when you first started so I could have been following the journey this whole time, as I feel I missed out on so much already. Of course Raven is my (overall likely too) favorite female character in the show, and as a BBxRae fan/supporter it's always nice to read stories about the two of them. With you stating the plot takes place in between seasons four and five I was somewhat worried and skeptical about how their interactions and relationship would play out because we did not get that in the show. Although their can always be possibilities for future seasons or specials if they are to be (I really freaking hope so!). Also from what I have read so far their romantic interests have not really gone too overboard or too fast beyond what would match their tv show selves, and I suspect it would be more logical for them when they are a bit older and mature. But besides that I really have liked their interactions and moments together. Very well done! I gotta' say it's really amazing how you add such good humor and emotion to the characters and the plot. You really match the characters well to the tv show and make them feel very believable. I am sure having both Raven and Beast as focus characters can be challenging, especially with dealing with their alter egos, although that has really expanded their characterization and potential lore. Speaking off, I was so impacted by Raven's tragic back story, and I can't imagine how much it affected her, and I think that would have been a good point to add to her back story, and I can't help but wonder what you may have for Beast Boy (if you were to reveal that, but I have yet to catch up). To be honest, when I first noticed the title with it mentioning the Justice League, I wasn't sure what to expect and if I would like it. But I remember seeing an unfinished DeviantArt comic about the Teen Titans working with Batman and that was fun to follow, and looking back on it along with seeing after seeing how many favs, reviews, follows, and how many chapters and words you created I then realized this story is a big deal, and it certainly is! If I may also add, I was a bit unsure about having the heroes overall being manipulated by Zatanna and whoever else but I think I can certainly say it helped expand and grow the story. I always felt that having the Justice League target Raven would be enough as the official conflict, and I think it would make sense as she is the daughter of Trigon and likely the new ruler/controller of the demon forces. (As I have said earlier I am still catching up) I have been curious since reading the description and imagined a moment later in the story where either Raven is caught or turns herself in and is brought to (I guess now the Watch Tower) where she is placed on trial or something where she is charged or prosecuted and has to look upon all the JL members who debate about her fate. I think that would be an intense scene where she has to be brave by facing against all these higher status heroes and despite her trying to redeem herself and never wanting to follow in Trigon's footsteps she still was expected to face the consequences for what happened, and she proceeds anyway as a means to make things right, even if it ends up costing her very life. That would make her a very tragic but such a special hero. I hope it's a happy ending, and again I am sorry for making this so long. I wanted to write this down before proceeding further, and I am sure I missed some more stuff to want to include here. Keep up the great work! |
Sanzojoe chapter 55 . 3/16 Life sucks, we get it. Glad to see you want to make it as epic as possible. |
Bhill62 chapter 55 . 3/15 This is actually a good story. Don't worry about how often to update. It's been almost 10 years since I've updated my story. So you're fine. |
WarpCrazy chapter 55 . 3/9 Short is better than nothing, and story creating can take time, especially when your mind has to be focused on something else rather than the story. I would like updates quickly but your life, learn, etc is more important than some fanfiction. So please don't feel too pressured to work on this story, though still when you can lol. And Zatanna is going to get yelled at next chapter, lol. |
frog31791 chapter 55 . 3/8 Glad you haven't forgotten about it. I hope that when you do finish it it won't be your last bbrae story |
Scarease chapter 55 . 3/8 Hello you stupid for not noticing that your being suckered evil . |
Azarath Cat chapter 55 . 3/8 So great to see some more from this again, and it's awesome to hear you're writing a novel! I've attempted to myself, and never managed to finish. So way to go! Don't worry about us readers being impatient, we stuck around for two years remember? We can handle a little waiting for whatever epicness you have planned. No matter how short, your chapters never disappoint. (Just occasionally frustrate with cliffhangers.) |