| Reviews for Persia Jackson and the Lightning Thief - DISCONTINUED! |
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Guest chapter 7 . 4/27/2019 Too |
BleckBlah5956 chapter 7 . 9/25/2018 I love how you made persia and hope to read more soon. Love this promise please update soon as you can |
Dark Serpent Cat chapter 7 . 7/8/2017 I really enjoyed this story and hope you continue That said I have a few questions/suggestions 1) Can Persia look into skills that male Percy never did? For example, I am a big fan of Witches, Wizards and other spell caster stories. If I had learned I was a greek demigod and that Hekate and magic existed you better believe I would do my best to learn magic 2) From what I saw you have been hinting that Will and Persia would end up together. I honestly hope that this doesn't become the end pairing. No offense, I like Will/Percy but when it comes to fem Percy people tend to pair her up with Will. If not Will then Apollo and Hermes. I know my personal opinion means little since this is your fic but I just hope to see a more unusual pairing. Then again my bias is towards Ares or Zeus but that would be in the distant future 3) Will Persia be talking to Hestia earlier then cannon? 4) Can Persia actually be someone who defends/sympathize with Hades from the beginning? I only saw this once years ago and haven't seen much but in Greek Myths Hades was a favorite figure of mine (which is why Disney's version and the PJO movies which I despise since they made way too many changes, and most other depictions of Hades drive me nuts. Although, at least Disney Hades, despite being evil, is actually awesome) 5) Can we see Rhea? It drove me nuts we never saw her 6) Will Persia ever use her relationship with gods and monsters as a way to annoy said dieties? Like instead of Mr D or Lord Dionysus she uses cousin in a harsh form? |
Rainy Guest chapter 7 . 1/14/2017 Hello there writer! I love your whole fanfic its super good...NOT! No Im not that mean but I was telling the truth it isn't a super good book its a PHENOMENAL NOVEL! The chapter titles are super honest and sometime funny. I hope you have a good day! |
Guest 2003 chapter 7 . 1/14/2017 I love the story. Is the pairing gonna be with Luke or Will. I think I'd like a love triangle. Or just Luke and Persia dating secretly. Idk just do what you think is right without making it cliché. Do not make Will fill in for Annabeth's part cause it would still be cliché. I'm hoping for the best. Please update soon. Please DO NOT ABANDON THIS. |
AladdinlSane chapter 7 . 1/13/2017 Great story. I really like fem Percy stories |
Fourtimesthesteak chapter 4 . 12/9/2016 I'm loving it. Bah du bu ba ba! Lol. I love it 4 real thou. Amazing work queen of ice. Love love love. |
Fourtimesthesteak chapter 3 . 12/9/2016 Love the story. Great work. |
belladu57 chapter 6 . 11/20/2016 Very good |
Umbruhon chapter 6 . 10/21/2016 This story is pretty good so far! A couple of times I have seen you say "Percy" instead of "Persia" and "he" instead of "she." Just proofread for that type of stuff before you post. TTYL. |
Demona Evernight chapter 5 . 9/2/2016 like it so far curious to see how things will change with Percy being a girl. Is the pairing with Nico perhaps? (please say yes not enough Nico to go around...seriously) |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/2/2016 Please update soon, the story is good. |
Son of Cupid chapter 5 . 8/31/2016 The story is great would love to see how it ends. Even thought its kinda the same but with fem Percy it is going to be a little or a lot different which is good. |
dogbiscuit1967 chapter 2 . 5/23/2016 Good chapter. I liked the part with the fates and the apple very clever |