I really like your writing and hinata being my favourite female character from naruto I always wanted to see her like this kicking some arrogant ass and I think that this fits well with hinata as a shy but strong person keep up the good work dude

Man this story was great please continue it.

I'm sorry, but I had to stop at this chapter. Creating drama for character development is not cool. In real life the betrayal of Sasuke and Hinata would be the end of their friendship - yes they suffered, but it's not the reason to take it out on Naruto. From this point it's no longer NaruHina. Your story is Naru/femSaku - it would be more honest to put it in tags.

As a fan of NaruHina, I love her warmth and devotion. These are two traits that make me look for stories with this pairing. In this chapter both advantages of Hinata were lost. She abandoned Naruto which would make him lose trust once again in real life. She also is no longer this warm woman that would be never capable of hurting people that she cares about.

I really enjoyed this

Awesome story m8. I loved the friendship between naruto, sasuke, and Hinata before everything got strained. I just hope things go back to normal between those 3. Naruto's friendship with Shino is also pretty awesome since they're both considered outcasts in their own ways, so they can somewhat relate to each other. I also love how hinata is so fiercely dedicated to naruto in protecting him, hence the name of the title of the story lol. I'm just glad naruto, hinata, and shino got to be in the same team. I know its been a few years since you've updated but I really hope you haven't abandoned this great story. Just know I'll always be happy to read a new chapter, cheers m8

Your making naruto kind of weak. All he suffered did not hsve any effect on him?

Hey, all I can say is awesome! I really hope this gets continued!

Hey great story! I know you said you don't write else you feel like it, so I just wanted to let you know I'm loving this story and I'm waiting for an update. :)

glad to find out more chapters . lookimg xorward . now to reread it

beautiful story!

Eh, gotta say I'm not sure how to take all this the time skips really strain a bit of belief. Look Naruto never really had anyone growing up he had some acquaintances and people to talk to yeah. But real friends, nah he didn't have that and I could see Naruto honestly start distrusting even more over this.

He should rightfully be outpacing both Hinata and Sasuke if he's training with his clones everyday along with Kakashi. Naruto actually has the ability to be like Itachi and drive forward through Shinobi ranks like a bat out of hell and worst of all he'll keep making and looking for friends to help him forward but I doubt he'd ever have that rock steady faith in Hinata and Sasuke again.

I sympathize with Hinata and Sasukes plight and their character growth makes sense but it shouldn't be without consequence. So maybe Naruto should have some growth from them not out of anger but just disappointment that the friends he had weren't really as good as he hoped.

They abandoned him and for someone like Naruto that would be brutal.

Well this isn't going to make Hinata less protective of Naruto. Some poor girl is gonna ask him on a date only to find Hinata giving them murder eyes.

Sucks about Itachi but stupid Obito and his Clan elders.

Yes, please don't ignore Naruto's ridiculous super car of a body, Dude should be built like Captain America with his regeneration. Like his muscles most likely take a much longer time to degrade and rapidly build up.

Terrible art in the manga never really showed just what the physique of Shinobi from Konoha should look like, I'll give some hand waves for Chakra but really. Should be like walking into a crossfit tournament or something.