Perhaps Robb goes with Arden? I would love to see the pairing be Robb and Arden.

Fascinating story, looking forward to more!

Interesting. Though what ate at me was the single line about eyes near the beginning.

George_RR_Martin: As for the violet eyes . . . look, Elizabeth Taylor has violet eyes, and she's not of Valyrian descent (that I know). Nor is she related to Aegon the Conquerer. Many Swedes have blue eyes, but not all those with blue eyes are Swedes, and not all Swedes have blue eyes. The same confusions exist in the 7 Kingdoms.

Summary has me turning away.
Ashara's bastard daughter is Dornish. A Dornish bastard.
The Dornish part alone makes her lot much better than bastards elsewhere, acknowledge or not.

So for her to be given away to Ned, despite the reception Bastards recieve outside of Dorne in Westeros, has me turning away from this story. It would have been more sensible for her to ward in the North after she growing up on Dorne, with her coming back to Dorne every now and then.

Are you gonna send Jon to the Wall?

You could make Arden's trip to Starfall a bit of a journey, maybe something about a pairing with Jon, an unexpected meeting with Barristan Selmy in King's Landing maybe...

Ive a feeling if there is a romance, between jon or robb. But it all depends where you go.

great story but have you thought who will be our favourite star love interest? which are the options?

There not too many Dayne stories, I've been meaning to write one soon once I'm done with my drafts. I am enjoying your piece. It fills a void or a fix I've been searching for quite a while.

Starfall is the name of House Dayne's ancestral castle, so Ashara Dayne's styling would be "the Lady Ashara of House Dayne of Starfall".