I'm new to this site. I created an account because of this story. I still have goose bumps. Please continue to write. I love the story and the style.

Wonderful! Thanks for this!

Very good story! I love how you wrote Spock and Nyota. I love Spock when he is clueless! Enjoyed this story!

Thoroughly enjoyable. The perfect amount of cuteness and stubbornness. Good job.

this is so, so well-written, and so gorgeous. just when i thought i couldn't love these characters more. thank you.

this was really good
1. it was a really creative and interesting way of formatting and telling and it was done in such a way that it was not confusing what was going on
2. the stories them selves where really enjoyable and an interesting exporation of the ways that same situation could go down depending on what else is going on with them at the time
3. the charecters felt real and in charecter :)

Loved. Just loved. Well done!

The long long drawn out tortuous buildup was unbelievably maddening and then was finally finally relieved the last fourth of the story. I felt overwhelmed with satisfaction to see this man overcome such devastating restrictions to such obvious love and emotion for her. Nyota’s 'no-more' stance saved them, forced him to look at life without her.
A beautiful ending to a difficult tale!

Fabulous. This is a really quality fic. I hope you get to a multi chapter epic in the future

A little confusing at first; it would have been helpful to add a few lines like "But on the other hand, Spock imagined that this happened instead..." just to clarify the shift. I was a little confused if Spock and Uhura had an existing relationship when this happened- he used her first name, and the earlier scenarios seemed to indicate that they were together but in a rough patch, while the later ones seemed to describe them as attracted to one another but not together. Of course the last one is the best, and placed perfectly.

Good work, and keep writing!

I enjoyed your story. It was well written. I would love to see you continue this story. There are so many different avenues you can have the story travel. Waiting to read more of your work.

Great job with this. I really enjoyed it.

I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you.

Wonderful!

Dear OhJohanna:

I am seated in my car with my phone in hand and could not stop your story and go into my house...the last account was the show-stopper.

Thank you for posting such an attention getter!

Botsey