Reviews for Making Things Right
Lou8 chapter 38 . 9/12/2018
Just completed the second instalment of your story. Oh have captured the characters perfectly and balance the romance and crime really well. I can’t wait to get into the next part.
Thanks again for sharing your talent.
Regards, Lou
Hazmatt chapter 38 . 10/22/2017
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!
raelynnhamoen007 chapter 38 . 9/28/2017
finished the first and second installment now... these are amazing! keep up the good workthe way you kept to the timeline as much as possible was awesome!
Guest chapter 38 . 5/19/2017
Welp, just finished book/part 2. This has been such a great read! Thank you for being so diligent in updating your stories (: You are an A writer just for that. Bonus points for also having great stories.
Bones2014 chapter 38 . 12/10/2016
Finally had a chance to finish this sequel today. Totally loved it. Bones consumes me. It's the only show I watch, & I watch it every day. I love reliving them through your stories. And the added AU just adds to the enjoyment. Not to mention the incredible smut! Unbelievable. Absolutely loving these series! Did I mention that the B&B smut is amazing?:) now on to the next edition in the series. It would be amazing if you continue through all 12 seasons?!
Bones2014 chapter 16 . 12/6/2016
Excellent writing with this case. I can feel their anguish, fear, & frustration. And having B&B together during this case is huge. Booth's pain is definitely palpable in that last paragraph. Amazing.
Bones2014 chapter 15 . 12/6/2016
Agree on both points in your ANs. I can't imagine Brennan knowing what "throw one" even means regarding the fight on the show. Seemed very OOC.
Bones2014 chapter 14 . 12/6/2016
That's exactly what I wanted to see in Vegas:) And what's the problem with them having sex all of the time? "That's HOT" as Tony would say...
Bones2014 chapter 13 . 12/6/2016
Who doesn't believe trig at what you just wrote regarding the costume sex wasn't on Booths mind that entire time on the show?so HOT!
Bones2014 chapter 10 . 12/5/2016
Brennan just handled Rebecca like we've all always wanted to do...lol. Excellent. And who doesn't love a dose of Pops?
Bones2014 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
I enjoyed this version much better regarding the conversation between Brennan & Cam. Worked out much better since B&B are a couple. And I hated Epps almost as much as Pelant.
Bones2014 chapter 6 . 12/3/2016
Best lines in this episode...I'm with Bones Cam. All the way. Don't doubt it for a second. I did such a happy dance when he said that & I saw the look on Cam's face. Pure in your face satisfaction. Your version just makes it that much sweeter.
Anonymous189 chapter 38 . 12/3/2016
Sorry I haven't reviewed each chapter, but I couldn't pass not reviewing the story. While I don't like it when you repeat parts that were shown on TV, I understand why you do and I really enjoy your AU take on things. Looking forward to Part 3. Good story. Thank you, oh, and thank you for making this a M story with smut! Much appreciated!
Bones2014 chapter 5 . 12/3/2016
Sounds as though Rebecca wants her cake & to eat it as well. Can't stand the thought of Booth being in a happy, successful relationship? Bitch! And yes, Cam really pissed me off in this episode. Living the rewrite though. So much better.
Bones2014 chapter 4 . 12/3/2016
I hope he decides to take Rebecca to court. That would be fun to read. I could see Brennan keeping up with the math of his infrequent visits. She would be awesome in court. Would love to read Rebeccas reaction to that...lol.
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