I didnt expect this to be as great as it was,
Amazimg job! I hope you keep writing this

Loved it. Hopefully you'll come back on day to finish it.

Hopefully you continue this, it'd be great.

This was really great. Is the plan to continue the combined narrative or simply have the Walkman be a catalyst to change? Or will this be a full crossover with the Celestials being responsible? Looking forward to more.

I like it. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Another great chapter. Though I have to ask: If Peter can only be in close proximity of Shinji, why was Peter able to stray far from Shinji in the first chapter? Just a question I thought I'd ask. Apart from that, pretty good chapter. Hope for the next update soon.:)

This is pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.

love it

The chapter tittle pun (Phase) made me chuckle :)

-THERE ARE SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW-

-"A-after yesterday? That was the first angel attack": AUGH! Angel attacks have at least a week of space between them. Hell in some interations it's a month. One per day would be kind of impossible for Shinji to learn all that he learned and stuff. Put in "A-after three days ago" or something. I know it's not another Angel attack yet in this point(they are about to see his traiing) but still...

-"...thankyou," Shinji muttered - forgot the space: "...thank you" This mistake repeats itself 3 more tmes. Do you just write 'thankyou' as a stylish thing?

-That's all. Good work.

Surprise surprise, peter is learning stuff. Nice description of the Geofront. The interacton of Peter and Shinji is GOLD! So it seems Peter is connected to Shinji on more than just sight...

Of course Peter saw right through what NERV was doing. Of course Shinji, being still the little wimp he was in the begining, broke down because of it. Well better now than in battle. Bonus AT field generation too.

LOL Of course Shinji would begin to think he is crazy, since only he can see Peter. Hey wait a minute, perfect japnese? Peter learned japanese already? Or did he set up his translator off screen? Because if he learned japanese it's anoher reason to say it's already been a few days. Real walkman means real peter... hmm, can Misato see the walkman?

Oh come on really? Peter disapears just as he and Shinji click? At least Peter know it wasn't a dream because his walkman is gone. Really looking forward for more.

Wonder what Shinji will think when he finds the Walkman before Quill finds out how to reappear near Shinji?

I like my man, I like a lot. Keep it coming!

Wow. I usually don't fave a fic the moment they are up, but this one got me hooked...

-THERE ARE SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW-

-twenty-seven - It's spelled with just a space: "twenty seven"

-No-one else - Again, t's spelled with just a space: "No one"

-Just those two. Very good work!

How did Peter go back to Earth to a assumingly other universe? Why only Shinji can see him? Is it the LCL? How is he immaterial?

That, and these two characters interacting is a recipee for awesomeness, disaster and overall interesting stuff. Like the introduction was much to Shinji's liking and How Shinji instantly figured Peter out and was not wweirded out by him (already used to weirdness after just becoming a pilot).

The way they instantly clicked was also very plausible; trauma and lack of mother. Good way to expose the cast of this universe to non Eva fans. Nice. LOL Nice Shinji dancing too; of course Peter would loosen him up.

This is how my reviews goes; I put grammar mistakes followed by analysis and opinions. May your muses always inspire you and I'm very curious to see how this goes. Let's see how it goes.

Brilliant, wish Peter wasn't some sort of ghost though

interesting, i like it.