This is great and should be a whole dang book. Let me know when you're published.

Come back to this story after a year only to find the characterization of Sans that I feel is most appropriate and for the main character to lose an arm. Status:Approved

it was worth the wait Author~sempi
stay determined ️

Hey, are you okay?

Nice, I like your OC, Jett is interesting

YAY! you're back! -hugs-

Cool, can't wait till the update

Heh, I find it funny that you post this two days after I say almost the same thing on my own story. Funny coincidence, eh?

Either way, I'm happy that you'll be continuing. I had observed a few off things on the story too, so it's good to hear you're going back and fixing it.

I look forward to your updates, and keep up the good work!

Hey there;
Except for the grammar mistakes I quite enjoyed this so far, though you left me hanging with my curiosity how you'll make him do the deed hahaha.
Anyway, gonna keep this short -
Hope you continue soon
KnM

I love your story! Reading it has been such a blast. 3

Continue please

Aaand we're dbz-ing all of this

Nice story your a "bone"fied writer

I love this story! I can't wait for more romance between Jett and Sans :)

(response to AN's)it's cool but i didn't see any errors tho so you be good for now plus i'm enjoying the story keep up the good work