Reviews for In the Garden of Ash
Urthona chapter 13 . 12/17/2019
A very well written developing story. It's too bad that WhiteDragonWarrior feels blocked and has put the story on hiatus. I hope that the author's inspiration will return, as I'm quite curious how it will unfold. One suggestion I would make, though, since the ASoIaF characters are at a remove from the familiar relationships of the books, would be a graphic genealogy (family tree) of the Marbrands, their spouses, and immediate kin. I have to admit I had a good deal of difficulty keeping straight who was married to whom, who was whose child(ren), &c. I checked the WIKI of Ice and Fire's Marbrand page, but it wasn't much help. Thank you, WhiteDragonWarrior, for sharing a good yarn with us all.
eragon95159 chapter 13 . 5/22/2019
Continue and update She change future enought to prevent war give kings save stark tamily and She get treasure from royal Gardena get husbarn (probaly She from lotr give him new embem white tree with seven stars similiar to symbol gondor)probaly is on north when able build greenhouses (her Secret Lab when She in time create peniciline as strong antibioticum and more).She sneak to royal families dont give they children gifts from unknow sources directly (is posible put on or inside toy poison or other Bad things)and someone to test it before put to child to reveal hiden poisons and diseases).and more.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/8/2019
How are you? Update soon, please?
LowKeezS chapter 2 . 3/3/2019
I really thought this was a Fairy tail fanfiction, Ill still read I have too much story on store.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/14/2018
Still waiting for an update!
Lord Trump chapter 13 . 10/23/2018
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story since you started writing it. Keep up the great work!

I am curious when Jasmine meets with Tywin Lannister and his family? It would be interesting to see how she could potentially help Tywin not hate Tyrion for his birth causing Joanna to die from childbirth and for being a dwarf. She could help Tywin should enough compassion to keep Tyrion as his heir should Jamie join the Kingsguard.

Jasmine should introduce some more modern technology, including the microscope, modern genetics, a greater variety of architectural designs, more modern health practices, advanced road systems and postal service, etc. I hope that she publishes at least one, if not all of her books. Perhaps she could gain recognition by the Citadel for her books and her knowledge.

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
ays102 chapter 13 . 9/2/2018
Oh man am i hooked! i cannot wait to see what happens next!
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 13 . 8/16/2018
Slice of life in Westros is still slice of life.
RandomCitizen chapter 13 . 7/27/2018
Oh boy. The damage that inconsideration does.

(Looks like both brothers are more full of themselves and similar than they would care to admit, eh? GoT nobility, tsk)
osterreicher97 chapter 13 . 7/23/2018
Huh, this story lives
Junior VB chapter 13 . 7/23/2018
Siento pena por Ryella.
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I feel sorry for Ryella.
The Weatherwitch chapter 13 . 7/23/2018
Love this story, looking forward to he next chapter!
Gman chapter 12 . 7/23/2018
So... the guy was gay or not?
RamblingInsomniac chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
it's Patois not patwa
Meester Lee chapter 4 . 4/11/2018
Interesting story.

I admit that despite my being a Yank, I'd be very curious to see what the Westerosi nobility and royal family would think of constitutional monarchies like Canada's or the British Commonwealth.
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