Another fantastic story, I look forward to the rest of Sadie's series.
PS. enjoy the ko-fi.
ShadowX42

Oh I adore the Ambassador for her straight forward nature. I do like that she did sort of ask Sarah Jane about her opinion on the Doctor. The Ambassador has only what she knows or heard about the Doctor from opinions on Gallifrey. So getting someone else's thoughts who actually knows the Doctor can help. Especially since Sarah Jane does admit it wasn't always rainbows and easy times. I think she can also admit better now that the Doctor isn't a perfect man. I'm really sad to see this story stop for now. I'm honestly looking forward to the Ambassador's adventures here. I also want to see the Old and New Time Lady's stories.

Another great chapter. I loved reading this story. I can't wait to read how Sadie will handle the next series.

ahh I'm really excited for timelady 6 now, just wish she'd be with 9 instead, so we'd see more of her, all the ones without pregnancies feel too short for me TT

I haven't seen much of Jo Grant, but what I have seen of her she is just the sweetest, kindest and most loyal person, if a bit clumsy, even when she grew older, from what we see in the Sarah Jane adventures. I found it slightly sad when she found out that Sarah Jane had seen the doctor again and she hadn't, and also how she thought that she was stupid and not good enough for the doctor. But she should have known that if she had been stupid, like she thought, the doctor wouldn't have wasted his time with her, since he must have been able to see her cleverness even when she couldn't. Also when the 11th doctor was talking to Jo, people say that there was a little bit of the 3rd doctor shining through and reassuring her.

There was this theory going around on YouTube about the doctor age. it's said that the 8th doctor lost track of his age and so decided, when he regenerated into the war doctor, to start his age from zero. That meant that the war doctor had been fighting in the time war for what he thought was 800 years. Also the 9th doctor saying he was 900 doesn't make sense because the 7th doctor had said that he was 953 in his very first story and could have been 1,000 years old when he regenerated into the 8th doctor. Just some interesting facts I thought you would want to know about.

It's interesting how I never thought how long the doctor was alone for until he met rose. I always thought that he went straight from regenerating into 9 to that warehouse. But then the war doctor said that the 11th doctor was 400 years older then him when 11 said he was 1200 or something. So that must have meant that the war doctor was 800, and the 9th said he was 900. That slightly sad.

It is genuinely nice to see how Sadie's thought process has changed when it comes to the Doctor and what he has been through since the war. It's easier to hang on to that anger for what he has done and want to believe that he feels no remorse. Obviously he seems fine off on adventures with companions and moved on with his life. It's not true and she's really seeing that.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read how Sadie will handle that adventure and how Sarah Jane and Jo will react to her.

Oh my God! Your latest preview of TL6 is just too funny. Oh, I really can't wait for that story!

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next part and see how it ends.

It's so strange to see that the TARDIS doesn't like Sadie. I'm so used to the bond between the TARDIS and Angel. Now I am curious as to what it is that has the TARDIS dislike her even though she is the Doctor's mate (the term starts with an A but I can't spell it lol). It is nice to see Sadie and the Doctor both working together on this adventure and being so parental/kind with young Kazran.

It's so nice to see the Doctor and Sadie attempting to work together and get along. Also she will truly realize that yes the Doctor has terrible luck lol

Gotta let you know first, so you know I’m trying to give constructive criticism, that I’ve basically read every one of your books and enjoyed it all. I think you’re an amazing writer who’s gone through a lot and was able to conquer it all.
My only problem with how I think this is going to pan out, for this story of corse, is if the Tardis/Idris is being stubborn with the Ambassador because she won’t accept the Doctor’s touch. I can’t remember if you ever stated that the Tardis is being stubborn, but if this is how you’re writing her than I, personally think it would be a bit of a mistake. I think the Tardis being that petty is out of character for her, seeing she wants the Doctor to be happy, and to twist that so she’s petty with the Ambassador over a genuine fear seems too, self centered? I don’t know the word(s) I’m trying to use to make what I said make sense, sorry.
If the Tardis-Pilot Union is similar to Angels than I can kind of see where you’re taking this, but if the Tardis is being stubborn to be petty than that’s a totally different rout for that one episode.
Sorry for how long this is. I really mean no offense, and I just wanted to share my ideas of this story’s possible future.

Another great chapter. I loved the Mary Poppins reference. I can't wait to read the next part.