| Reviews for After the Fall |
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   Vanadir chapter 15 . 12/21/2019 Thank you for a great story |
| sandmanwake chapter 4 . 11/5/2019 Why would Harry and Hermione want Ron to "come around" considering what they know he did in the future? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/4/2019 For heavens sake cut out the 'language harry' every, bloody, time. miss prim gets old really really quickly. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2019 If I were harry and I had just come back from the thick of a dreadful battle with death eaters, i think i'd be desperate to take care of the horcruxes ASAP before I did much of anything else. And knowing my so-called best friend and his sister had potioned me and hermione? I'd never speak to the traitor again. |
| Latarra chapter 15 . 7/21/2019 Good story, well written. |
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 7 . 7/11/2019 It had to be that or a bombarda down the throat or in the face at least, maybe high explosives |
| bet7368 chapter 15 . 5/31/2019 Just found your story really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing this. Have favorite and followed. |
| LilLinkGirl chapter 15 . 1/1/2019 So close but so far |
| jada951 chapter 15 . 12/19/2018 I would love to see you update this story. Could you please? |
| Ice Demon Ranger chapter 15 . 11/1/2018 Thank you for sharing what you have written. I simply wish this had been finished. It is an excellent story. A few new tweaks to Harry gone back in time and remembering the tri-wiz. |
| Mmars69 chapter 15 . 10/31/2018 I like the comradery between the champions. An excellent story so far. Thanks for writing. |
| Calmzone1 chapter 15 . 10/31/2018 Lol, that was hilarious! And I was having too much fun reading, but I loved his response to the first task also! Well done. I wish people reading would understand how much effort is involved in writing, if anyone gives you grief, just politely tell them to go try writing their own multi-chapter story, while dealing with various challenging real life issues. And make sure they send you the link for it so that you can read and review their work for them too. Your writing style and ability has been improving throughout the writing of this story. It has gotten tighter and more focused. Well done. |
| BratGirl1983 chapter 15 . 10/17/2018 I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update. |
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 11 . 9/7/2018 nicely done. I presume the goblins are gonna get the ring, Sirius and the goblins the locket, and harry and dobby the diadem?. that should be the set. erase them and ole tommy should be weakened a bit. |
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 9 . 9/7/2018 he didnt get the egg, so no clue. he should not be aware of the task. how could dumbasadoor inquire about his plan of attack? |
