It's very good and i could find myself in the different universe of it.
Though i had some problems..
-Hermione is smart after a year of not hearing from everybody and her parents keep her away didn't she felt that was suspicous, instead of coming back to find out she goes away? but okay can see your point.
-I don't get why dumbles leaves the school and goes into hiding/retiring? in no fanfics where such things happen is this little thing a big problem, only if he came slandered by the media or was convicted by trail.
-I get why harry want it do this way, but not letting anybody know the truth is disturbing.
-Odd that dumbles stays away and suddenly comes by when bill died, not only they miss there damn chance cause he dropped his wand. But that dumbles didn't do anything while he had everybody bound, like say take harry with him.

yay happy ending with Crookshanks too :D

This was great

Seriously one of my favorite FFs I’ve ever read. The pace, the characters, the romance, the grief (ok maybe more deaths than I wanted). Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing!

Albus Poncey Wanking Bloody Dumbledore. I literally laughed out loud when I read this. This was great.

Um, what?! Is all I can say after this chapter. I don’t normally comment after just chapters but this story has me...

I would really like to rant and rave about how unfair this is in minute detail but I don’t want to ruin the story for anyone else so I’ll just say that I am not happy. About 2 things in this chapter. Very well written though. I’m excited to continue on.

The combined weakness, fallibility, and generic stupidity of that sort can only be described as "jumping the shark beyond all versions of suspension of disbelief as a way of artificially extending the word count of a story".

Is this the story where nobody actually pays for what they did to Harry and Hermione?

A most enjoyable read...Thank you! :)

Ahhh I love it! Anytime I get a good dumble-bashing I'm up for it lol. a great story

Thanks again!

Wonderful tale. Thanks for sharing.

I hate plotpoints enabled via unbelievable stupidity. Arthur could have dropped the anti-app wards if he'd wanted to but chose to stand around with his thumb up his ass, and Sirius could have EASILY levitated Albus along behind him.

I'm I right on saying, the Harry/Luna and Hermione/Bill moments were based on your other shippings? It seems like it was. Also I want hex that Adam guy into oblivion.